Suitcases chapter 28

Mar 30, 2011 00:06

Chapter 28

Sophie pov

“Oh great, just dandy… does she plan it or summit” I thought as Sian let her into the house. “Do you mind Soph” Sian asked me as I sighed. What did she expect me to say, yes I’m fine with you kissing another woman in our house after you just told me you didn’t want a divorce. For god sakes. “No” I smiled fakely as Laura ( Read more... )

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angelsgirl_17 March 29 2011, 22:34:38 UTC
I said to chels before that im loving ths bet use have cos I get to read your updates quicker. Love both of ur stories. My heart broke for sophie in this. I have the gutted feeling too about sian sleeping with someone else :-( xx

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sophieksian March 29 2011, 22:35:05 UTC
awwww i feel soo sorry for sophie. not really like how sian could do that to her and i hate laura haha. loved it though xxxx

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willow59 March 29 2011, 22:43:02 UTC
OMG!! This just gets more amazing the longer it goes on!! Its written so beautifully i really hope they end up back together!! Please say they do!! Absolutely adore this awesome story and can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update soon :) xx

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ceyaro March 29 2011, 22:48:08 UTC
well it won't be less than 34h before i update -_-' bloody bet *sigh*

anyways thanks for your comment they always make me smile

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chels5599 March 30 2011, 00:36:46 UTC
Lol!!!
haha :P
you love it babe ;)

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ext_469223 March 29 2011, 23:03:19 UTC
Your writing is flawless! And the flashbacks are just brilliant! God knows how u come up with them but they're incorporated in to the story perfectly! Love how you're not rushing it either and letting the story develop. xx

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i_love_sophian March 29 2011, 23:12:21 UTC
Awwwwwww poor soph, i hate laura even more now. I feel really sorry for soph, amazing as usual xxxxx

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