Turn

[ceslas]

Title: Turn
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Post-BDM
Word Count: 100
Characters: Simon/Kaylee
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: As always 

Comments

[ceslas]

That fluffy quality is exactly what slows us down I think. Most of the Sille I have seen is written by teenagers or those who are still really in touch with their inner teenager and that just does not lend itself to much depth or veracity. Simon is such the purist that it is easy to miss his inner strength and just see the fumbling.

Simon and Kaylee are, seriously, the greatest look into an underestimated romance,

Agreed, but it is sooo hard to get past the superficial.

And then to see this, and get to enjoy this!? Classic Saylee, and I could hear them, and even see the 'ohshit!' face he always makes when he realizes he just ate his foot and the little eyeroll she gives him when she calls him on it. Something similar to their cute little scene at the end of Jaynestown, and, yeah, so flipping simple and direct and sophisticated in ways that I rarely get to read when I'm searching for well-written Saylee

And then you stroke the Muse's ego with this!!! *Bows humbly* Thank you, thank you, thank you! That was almost exactly what I saw when the scene unfolded!

'Wibbly' just has to come from Kaylee on a regular basis- it is one of her words of choice I think.

Psst, that pretty Simon icon and the B&W Zoe/Jayne one are both from jadeleopard, I believe - Hell, I'd bet money on it. I was just looking through all the pretties and I saw them both, *hopes she's being helpful and not coming off as snooty because she hates coming off as snooty even though, for whatever reason, she always does*

I thought I credited them as the same...will look asap, and no, you do not come off as snooty to me at all.. I like your style.

I am glad Simon and Kaylee rang true to you, they make me wibbly! In an irritated way though... >;-\