Unexpected

[ceslas]

Series: Unexpected
Title: Unexpected Chapter 2
Author: Ceslas and Bookaddict43
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Characters: Zoe/Jayne, Crew
Rating: PG, will go to PG-13/R
Comments: A new series in a collaboration between 

Comments

[razycrandomgirl]

:-D I can't wait to see where this is going. Next chapter, next chapter, next chapter!

[ceslas]

LOL next chapter is Bookaddicts...gotta wait... course, she is usually real quick ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

Doing a marvelous job and I love this. :-D

Too cool.

[alexis_laforge]

“Gorramnit Mal, hurry up, gonna have ta start throwin’ rocks if ya take much longer with that short."

I've gotta say it. "Shore wish we had some grenades!" Oh yes. Jayne and grenades is NEVER a bad combo.

Re: Too cool.

[ceslas]

Well, who wouldn't wish for grenades in that situation ;)
So Jayne went with the next option...

I'm gonna have to channel Wash, here, a little bit.

[alexis_laforge]

Jayne likes throwing things and things that explode. How could grenades ever go wrong for him? It's a love affair for the ages.

Re: I'm gonna have to channel Wash, here, a little bit.

[ceslas]

Ya throw what ya got, dong ma? Had rocks, no thanks ta Mal :-\

[bookaddict43]

Interesting! You've left Jayne and Mal in a pickle there my friend and I like Nisham very much. His burgeoning relationship with Zoe is very nicely written - I wonder what is going to happen next? *grins* And how the hell am I going to write it!!

[ceslas]

Well now, I know what I think happened with Mal and Jayne (cause I do have the heart of angst and well, there was that stray bullet...) and Nisham had to feel like a man who could stand on his own two feet, be attractive to Zoe and compelling enough that they could both be independent of each other...

Writing it? That is in your court >;0)

[mercenarysong]

so ruel to leave me hanging on both ends. but I'm patient. I'll wait. This chapter was very well written by the way -- great imagery, characters spot on *esp Jayne* and just hoorah.

*le pant...le pant*... what happens next? hurrrry.

(Don't know why I'm channeling a pepe le peu love kitten tonight)

[ceslas]

Thank you! I am always happy when I get Jayne right, cause well, it's Jayne...and he just likes to talk to me I guess >;0)

As for what happens next... Dunno, cause that plan folks seem to think we have...yeah, no plans, nope, not a one. We all know how plans turn out anyway...

Hi Pepe le Peu! >;0)

[maureen]

Oh, no! I didn't want to like Zoe's date, but now I do. I still am pulling for Jayne in the end. Can't wait to see where you guys take this.

[ceslas]

Sorry about that, but be honest, can you see Zoe being interested in anyone who wasn't a really cool, wonderful person? Would be kinda out of character you know >;0)

Glad you like it so far though! (And yeah, pulling for Jayne myself!)