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oi_kurosaki April 24 2014, 02:45:39 UTC
oh mygod ok wow i just. wow. i have so much to say and yet not enough at the same time how do i start?
this was so beautiful and the way you wrote the destruction and death was so brilliant and depressing at the same time and part of me kept wanting to stop because i knew it was going to get worse and i wanted a happy ending but then another part of me just couldn't stop. i wish the thoughts in my mind were more elegant and better-phrased but i am so overwhelmed with how amazing this was that all i can think of is wow ok very very good ugh so good.

i actually had to step away for a while in order to process more of my thoughts and ok i finally came up with english words yes??

i really really like the characterization, especially kyungsoo because of the whole duality and breaking/fixing people and just how does he compartmentalize his life so well? and then jongin walks in and bleeds (metaphorically and literally) all over his life and then everything blends together and wow the paranoia at the end, the way he slowly loses his sanity was amazing. i kind of wish this could turn into a french psycho-thriller ugh it would be so good but i fear no director could ever do such beautiful writing justice.

THIS IS SO GOOD THAT I'M ALMOST SAD I READ IT, BECAUSE NOW I CAN'T GO BAD READ IT WITHOUT KNOWING WHAT HAPPENS, UGH

UGHHHHHH I STILL CAN'T GET OVER IT I'M SO HAPPY AND SAD AND MAD ALL AT THE SAME TIME???

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ceruleanlight April 25 2014, 23:36:23 UTC
This comment was elegant and lovely and made me feel warm and fuzzy inside what more could you ask for?! You basically just summarized my thought process when I was writing these characters, wow. Haha, I would definitely watch something like that but aww, you're too nice to my suspect writing skills. *hides behind a wall of feels* Thank you so much! :D

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