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Sekrit Cabal Ficlet Battle (Version 2)

Dec 20, 2007 23:27

SEKRIT CABAL FICLET BATTLE HAS BEGUN!!

How to Participate:

Pick a prompt, any prompt, from the list below - then write a ficlet answering said prompt. Post it in the comments to this post, and then bask in praise ^_^

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seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 cerebel December 21 2007, 06:06:38 UTC

Mohinder doesn’t know where he is, but it doesn’t particularly concern him ( ... )

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 shimmeree December 21 2007, 06:15:10 UTC

Yay! So good!

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 cerebel December 21 2007, 06:43:40 UTC

Thanks! :P

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 tju_tju_tju_tju December 21 2007, 06:29:01 UTC

*sighs happily* I've missed your writing so...this was absolutely gorgeous. Your prose always knocks me off my feet. Amazing.

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 cerebel December 21 2007, 06:44:37 UTC

Thank you! I missed writing, period. I hope this battle does some to loosen up my reluctance to actually get down and write :P

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 bedofbones December 21 2007, 08:06:34 UTC

Your imagery is so beautiful! I love the description of the glowing brightness in the beginning. The whole life that you hinted at between them is so haunting- it's like a life well lived that they can only half remember.

And because I'm a romantic at heart who loves happy endings, I hope that 2 seconds after this ends Mohinder knocks Bennet out and escapes for a life of torrid passion on the run. ;)

I'm a little confused about the storyline, though. Is the first part a dream? An alternate reality or parallel universe? I can't really tell what's real and what's not.

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 cerebel December 21 2007, 23:28:14 UTC

Thank you!

The beginning was a dream. A dream that creepily coincided with what happened in the second part, in real life. What I was thinking was that Sylar controlled the dream, or maybe sensed that Mohinder had it, and responded accordingly. And that Mohinder rejected him - or, in the happy-ending way, pretended to reject him :P

I'm glad you liked :)

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 airspaniel December 21 2007, 16:36:56 UTC

Way to start things off with a bang! ^_^ As always, my darling, you are a tough act to follow. But this was fabulous!

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 cerebel December 21 2007, 23:28:40 UTC

Well, thank you :P You should go write me some Tin Man prompts. *nudges*

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 angary December 28 2007, 13:43:37 UTC

Fantastic job (as always)! I love the imagery in the beginning, and how honest it all is; that Mohinder ends up killing Sylar, how hesitant he is to do so, and that Bennet is almost testing him.

This has completely satisfied my craving for your Mylar fics for now :D

Re: seasons, heroes, mohinder/sylar, a chance on a bright morning, pg-13 cerebel January 4 2008, 20:03:58 UTC

Haha. I've been kind of a bad Mylar writer, since I haven't written any for so long :\

Thank you! I'm glad you liked :P

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