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Fic: (his choice) - Heroes

Nov 06, 2007 00:51

Pairing: Sylar/Maya/Alejandro
Rating: hard R
Spoilers: through 2x06
Disclaimer: These characters aren't mine.
Notes: Spanish phrases translated by a friend of mine. Unbeta'ed; all mistakes are mine.
Summary: It's what Sylar has to do, to get control.

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Sylar dies in agony.

It’s not as though he wasn’t expecting it, this time. At first, it was ( Read more... )

heroes: sylar/maya/alejandro, heroes, threesome

Comments 42

some_stars November 6 2007, 07:10:07 UTC

so, uh, i saw this and:

[01:02] lcsbanana: OH OH OH OH MY GOODNESS
[01:02] lcsbanana: SOMEONE GOOD JUST POSTED SYLAR/MAYA/ALEJANDRO
[01:02] unlovablehands: dsufhdsiufah
[01:02] unlovablehands: LINK PLZ

AND WE WERE NOT DISAPPOINTED. god, this is fucking STUNNING, your sylar is so twisty and *crazy* and needy and vicious and REAL. and I've been longing for some Alejandro fic that gives him a personality *g* so WOO HOO I LOVE THIS SO MUCH ON ALL FRONTS. GOD the scene with the sylar/alejandro kiss is just--layer upon layer of (self-)deception until the 'real' isn't even discernible anymore. oh, *sylar.*

unlovablehands November 6 2007, 07:27:34 UTC

What she said!

violin_road November 6 2007, 07:56:05 UTC

THIRDED

cerebel November 6 2007, 17:20:26 UTC

LOL. Thanks! ^_^

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rawthorne November 6 2007, 07:32:42 UTC

That was pretty darn amazing. I have mixed feelings about Sylar (always had, always will) but I like him in this. I like that you stayed true to his character and still made these events plausible. I like that it was sexy without it being porn and I like all the references to control and seduction. The three of them do have a certain aura, don't they?

Good job. I liked it muchly.

cerebel November 6 2007, 17:57:51 UTC

I'm not really a huge Sylar fan...but I really, really love messing around with his character in fic. It's hard striking an emotional balance, with him, that makes a romantic relationship NOT manipulation or rape.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked :)

mistressmerr November 6 2007, 07:42:36 UTC

Awesome. Sylar/Maya skeeves me out like you wouldn't believe, but throw Alejandro in there and it somehow makes it A-OK. Maybe because it's her blind naivete that makes it so icky, and Alejandro being somewhat on the ball with Sylar balances that out? This was fantastic, and I'm still not entirely sure who was seducing who and who was successful. We all win.

cerebel November 6 2007, 17:59:16 UTC

It kinda skeeves me out too, but I think there's a way it could work with emotional balance - it just requires a strange combination of need/regret/anger from Sylar.

I'm glad you liked! :)

flwrpwr_vampyre November 6 2007, 08:00:43 UTC

Dear lord. *shivers, shudders, melts* Too hot, I love how he's controlling them by letting them control him.

cerebel November 7 2007, 00:45:22 UTC

Thank you! I love that kind of dynamic :P I'm glad you liked!

furius November 6 2007, 09:02:39 UTC

You have such a mind!

First Bennet/Mohinder and now this. Granted, the thought of Maya and Alejandro in the same bed squicks me, but you added Sylar, whose influence on floundering Maya counterbalanced by Alejandro which makes this all right and just insanely attractive.

I'm utterly speechless. What I love best throughout is how that a powerless Sylar tries to convince himself that he still has all the control and power in this...

Mohinder really should meet Alejandro. They would bond, I think.

cerebel November 7 2007, 00:46:52 UTC

LOL. Thank you :P

Sylar/Maya and Maya/Alejandro are both a little out-there to me. But, I don't know, this story really just wanted to be written.

Sylar has to believe he has the power, or this really is for nothing...it would probably really screw him up if he thought he didn't have the power in any given situation.

I'm glad you liked ;)