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Fic: In the Give of Your Voice (Heroes)

Aug 25, 2007 23:24

“Forgive me if the two seem remarkably similar,” Mohinder snaps.

- - -

Mohinder freezes in shock, his heart pounding against his chest. There’s no way to misinterpret the image on the camera - the other two, they’re heading this way, and Thompson is dead.

Thompson is dead. The blood spreads slow and thick -

Mohinder swallows the bile ( Read more... )

heroes: mohinder/thompson, heroes

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cerebel August 26 2007, 05:13:05 UTC

...I love you so much right now.

tju_tju_tju_tju August 26 2007, 05:09:57 UTC

*biggest grin the world has ever seen*

Oh, thank you so much for writing this. I really liked the disjointed, out-of-order way that you wrote this. It gives a sense of uneasiness, which of course fits perfectly. And the pacing was excellent. I loved loved loved it xinfinity. A totally awesome present. *morally grey hug*

The counter digs into Mohinder’s back; Thompson’s hand is hot on his thigh, hooked over Thompson’s hip. Their groins are flush together, somehow, and Mohinder moans around the tongue in his mouth, loosening against the hand that slips under his shirt. <---HOT.

cerebel August 26 2007, 05:23:17 UTC

LOL.

You're very welcome! I wasn't sure the disjointed would work - it's a gimmick I've used before, but I've never actually put a fic in exactly opposite order, back to front.

*returns morally grey hug* I'm glad you liked ^_^

g_shadowslayer August 26 2007, 05:26:03 UTC

Oooh -- very nice. Gave me chills at the beginning and the end...

cerebel August 26 2007, 05:59:25 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked ^_^

forsquilis August 26 2007, 06:03:53 UTC

This is how the story ends.

Wow. I almost didn't read this because...well...this is a pairing I didn't really want to think about. But this was just so well-written...amazing. To me, good fic is less about the characters in it than it is about the skill of the writer, and this one was excellently done. Thanks.

cerebel August 26 2007, 16:30:35 UTC

Yeah. No one really wants to think about Mohinder/Thompson.

Well, thank you :) I appreciate that; I'm glad you liked!

mistressmerr August 26 2007, 06:17:32 UTC

Wow, I didn't even shudder once reading this. Impressive. Loved the format, very well done, and I'm impressed that your knack for pacing even works backwards.

cerebel August 26 2007, 16:31:21 UTC

LOL. Well, I think this fic's pacing worked better backwards. It's not as though Thompson dying would be an OMGTWIST - everyone knows the ending. What people didn't know, in this story, is the beginning.

I'm glad you liked ^_^