Fic: Sweet Dreams (Heroes)

[cerebel]

Is he dreaming?

It doesn’t feel like a dream. It’s too vivid, the sensory details too exact. Mohinder can hear the slight echo of his footsteps - he can feel cool tile against his feet. Dreams are a little blurry, a little off, like things don’t really exist unless you’re looking right at them.

Mohinder cautiously makes his way up the

Comments

[lovemyfaceoff]

It has gotten to the point that everytime you post a new story I let out a shriek of joy then grab a box of tissues.
-falls over-
this was so wonderful

[cerebel]

LOL. Tissues for the inevitable emotional fallout? :P
I'm glad you liked ^_^

[lovemyfaceoff]

Lol they seem to be with a lot of your stories. You have the amazing power to make me weep

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

That was amazing. And so utterly cool and awesome. Extremely well-written, as always. How do you do it?

I wish I had something else to say, but I do not, except I am Very Jealous Of You Indeed.

[cerebel]

I have written a lot of Bad Stories, believe me :P

Well, you have your own style, and it's awesome too. But, thank you; I'm glad you liked ^_^

[airspaniel]

Way to write something that not only would satisfy the parameters of my delinquent smut week prompt, but is also about eight million times better than the piece I have so far. :P

Who am I kidding? I can't be bitter with you. ^_^

This was really interesting, and I really appreciated the way you wrote Mohinder here; the way he's fascinated and repulsed and never really certain what he wants... It all rang very true for me. Good work!

[cerebel]

It's because I want to show you up. *nods*

Mohinder is a little too fascinated for his own good. His curiosity just keeps getting him into trouble -_-

Thanks! I'm glad you liked ^_^

(PS: What was your smut week prompt?? *is interested now*)

[thefreshchuff]

Ooh, I loved this. It was so interesting, and you weaved the dreams together so believably that, upon finishing it, I felt like I was coming out of a trance myself. I loved Mohinder's fascination and repulsion, and Sylar's anguish. Such an interesting idea!

I always get so excited when I see you've posted something. :D

[cerebel]

Mohinder was sleeping *so much* in this story...I actually made a narcoleptic joke to my beta, then went back and had Peter make it in the story.

Hee. I'm glad you liked ^_^

[kael_raye]

Every post you make is awesome!!! I'm so jealous and in love with you!!!

[cerebel]

Well, thank you! I appreciate that :P