Fic: Only My Hands to Guide Me (Heroes)

[cerebel]

One, two, three, four, five. Turn, step.

One, two, three, four, five. Turn, step.

Featureless grey concrete. One wall made entirely of glass. No bare piping. One cot on each side, a toilet in the corner. And utter, utter darkness.

One, two, three, four, five.

Five steps across.

Mohinder is going to go crazy. Any more of this,

Comments

[holy_cockroach]

Zomg what a wonderful twist, having Sylar give Molly his powers. Poor Claude, but he was being a jerk anyways.

The end is so sad though. She saves them and then Mohinder rejects her because she is a murderer... *cries* And now they can't be a happy family anymore *cries more*

*sniff* But this whole story is beautiful. Nice job.

[cerebel]

I was trying to set it up in the last part, but I think I was fairly subtle about it.

I know! Way to bring them as happy as they possibly can be (with Mohinder and Sylar starting to get together) then completely ruin it.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked :)

[airspaniel]

I almost didn't read this series, because crack!fic aside I couldn't see how it would work. But I should know to trust you better than that.

This whole thing is so interesting and original... and sad. By god, it's sad. But I love it, and can't wait for more!

[cerebel]

Haha. I wanted to see if I could do it, so I gave it a shot.

Actually, I think this is going to be the last part. I think I've said basically all I want to say about the characters.

Thank you!

[airspaniel]

You know, I'm happy with that, too. ^_^

[archerstar]

Oh, that was good. Molly YAY!!!

Also? Mmmmmmm...Sylar.

[cerebel]

Wow. There were a lot of 'm's there. ^_^

[herverylowness]

Oh man, what a choice. Poor Mohinder.. poor Sylar. I'm hoping this isn't the end though!

[cerebel]

It is, sorry. That's all I'm writing on this one.

But, I'm glad you liked ^_^

[gyllespi]

!!!

That was literally the only response I could think of when you gave the story that twist. Holy crap! Mohinder rejecting Molly, and Sylar, and - so that's why Molly pulled the gun on him. Oi vey. And - oh, wow - Matt Parkman, and Claire, and the mirror... Claude's appearance was... was... omgosh. I can't even begin to say how awesome reading this was.

[cerebel]

LOL. I figured hey, if Sylar could give himself powers from other people, maybe he could figure out how to give other people powers from *him*...and that's unexpected enough to make a pretty good twist.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked :)