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Fic: Recessional (Heroes)

Jul 01, 2007 23:23

“Do you believe in love at first sight?” asks Zane Taylor.

Mohinder shrugs, too casual. He can feel his heart beat a little faster; his palm slips, just a tad, on the steering wheel. “There can be a biological connection from a simple glance,” says Mohinder. “Desire. Lust. It is from hormones, pheromones; nothing more.”

“So,” says Zane, “ ( Read more... )

heroes: mohinder/sylar, heroes

Comments 56

tju_tju_tju_tju July 2 2007, 04:31:33 UTC

I wish I could write fics as fast as you do. And as well.

This was SO good. Interesting direction to take, Mohinder knowing about it for much longer than everyone figures. I liked it muchly.

I had Mohinder find out about "Zane's" true identity almost the exact same way in my first Mohinder/Sylar fic, actually. Except it was later, while they were heading back to New York. Great minds, etc.

He wonders how long it would take Sylar to tear this from him, too. DRAMATIC IRONY! YAY!

cerebel July 2 2007, 04:35:48 UTC

I'm just a freak; it's okay.

I thought it might be interesting. Mohinder as a kind of willing victim.

LOL. Wow, one of these days I *really* have to go back and read all these fics I've missed. Seriously, I've barely read any Mylar, beyond what's been posted after I started writing it a few weeks ago.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked :)

tju_tju_tju_tju July 2 2007, 04:48:07 UTC

Well, it was...*checks* It was April when I posted it, so yeah, I don't blame you for missing it or anything, heh. It wasn't that good, anyway. I wrote it in about an hour, which is funny, because the fic I had written right before that one took me about six weeks to write, haha.

LMAO You'd be at it for a while...you'd probably have to dedicate, like, an entire week to it, with very few stops. There's a LOT of Mohinder/Sylar fic out there. Mylar is going to take over the world someday. But I have a fic rec list in my journal, and there's some really good ones there, so you can check that out if you like.

cerebel July 2 2007, 04:57:10 UTC

Ha! Yeah, well. Sometimes fics work like that.

Well, I doubt I'd read all of it. I'd skip around, a lot, and therefore probably miss a lot of good ones. But I feel so ignorant... :\

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kael_raye July 2 2007, 04:33:48 UTC

Wow...That was just...So much angst...How do you do it!?! Gah!!!

cerebel July 2 2007, 04:36:48 UTC

LOL. Just add miserable layer upon layer to an already miserable relationship...

Thanks!

greatwhitesnark July 2 2007, 04:35:06 UTC

Oh wow. That was... words escape me right now, but it was certainly something. I like that Mohinder already knew Zane was Sylar before sleeping with him. It adds another twisted layer to their relationship. Really well done.

cerebel July 2 2007, 04:37:59 UTC

Yeah, it really does. It makes Mohinder a much darker figure, because he's choosing the angst on *purpose*...and leading Sylar straight to Dale Smithers.

Thanks :)

airspaniel July 2 2007, 04:36:01 UTC

This... this is how it's done. Absolutely breathtaking.

cerebel July 2 2007, 04:38:16 UTC

LOL. Well, thank you :)

ashinae July 2 2007, 04:40:16 UTC

This was just gorgeous. Well done!

cerebel July 2 2007, 04:50:25 UTC

Thanks! :D