Fic: What You Wish For

Jun 26, 2007 20:37

Matt can tell the precise moment when he first had suspicions.

“There’s a call for you, sir,” comes the voice over the intercom. “It’s Mister Linderman.”

Nathan looks with distaste at the phone.

It’s always like this, thinks Matt. A call from Linderman, and Nathan drops everything. The President of the United States, in the pocket ( Read more... )

heroes: mohinder/sylar, heroes

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akire_yta June 27 2007, 01:48:38 UTC
omg, that is a brilliant fix for my biggest problem with String Theory - how could Matt not know?

Mad love!

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cerebel June 27 2007, 02:07:02 UTC
I know! That's kind of a plothole...a little hard to impersonate someone when you have a TELEPATH on staff.

Thanks! :D

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tju_tju_tju_tju June 27 2007, 01:57:05 UTC
You strike again!

BRILLIANT. BRILLIANT BRILLIANT BRILLIANT. I would say something more interesting, but I can't, as I'm knee-deep in making a fanmix and only surfaced to read your fic. But it was brilliant.

(You've got a little typo, though: Mohinder’s mouth twists. “All right. Should be a quotation mark there)

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cerebel June 27 2007, 02:09:02 UTC
LOL. Like I'm some kind of supervillain...(headline: CEREBEL STRIKES AGAIN)

I'm glad you liked :P

(.....*fixes typo*)

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aelora June 27 2007, 01:58:08 UTC
Eeee!! Perfection!! I positively *love* this!

Working together.... for the greater good... in totally the wrong way. Ha!

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cerebel June 27 2007, 02:12:59 UTC
Hee. Yeah, 'the greater good' here totally being 'whatever Sylar wants'. :P Thank you! I'm glad you liked :D

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rheakurokawa June 27 2007, 01:59:19 UTC
I love it, i fucking love it, because it's so... so possible and simply so. And because Sylar loves Mohinder so goddamned much and Mohinder finally accepts it, and because of Matt, and because of everything. It's no surprise really, as soon as i saw your name pop up i knew i'd love it. You probably write the best Mylar out there, or at least the one closest to my heart.

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cerebel June 27 2007, 02:17:43 UTC
I kind of like the idea of Mohinder as a willing victim, of sorts...

Well, thank you! I really appreciate that :)

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archerstar June 27 2007, 02:01:48 UTC
Hee. I still love that last line. It's very Heroes-esque.

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cerebel June 27 2007, 02:18:06 UTC
:P I love writing resounding last lines...

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