Seeing the Light, Chapter 26/26 (part one of three - whoops!)

[cenea]

Seeing the Light, Chapter 26/26 (part one of three). Chapter 24 part one (includes links to previous chapters), part two , Chapter 25 part one part two
Pairing: This part - Jason/Mark, Robbie/Gary, Howard/Gary. 
Rating: NC-17. 
Words (this part): 3000.
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Sci-Fi. Top Gear crossover.
Summary: Simon is going to be crowned King of

Comments

[asilia]

Hahaha, what a great way to sum up your story: ‘You’re not another of that imbecile, nancy-boy band I sucked into this once-orderly universe, are you?’

No, seriously, what an amazing update, I was holding my breath the entire time!

You wrote Mark's inner conflict so well, and at some points it's even hard to dislike Simon (although he definitely scares me!)... and it made me so sad when Mark almost shied away from Jason's touch. He's really gonna need A LOT of comfort after all the whumping, poor Markie!

[cenea]

*g*! Glad you liked...maybe I should have got James to write the whole thing?? Might have cut a few thousand words...

Mark's been pretty interesting to write at this stage - although he let Jason help him when he was really sick, I kind of figured it could never be as simple as 'lets all hug and be alright'...the comfort's going to have to be a bit more than that (like in your wonderful fic...hehe, we like to make things difficult on ourselves, don't we???)

Simon/Mark has ended up extremely creepy and complex...which makes me want to write backstory. Because I'm evil like that ;)

But now I have to go play with kids...eeep!

[asilia]

You're definitely right - no way the other boys can just come and hug Mark and everything's alright again, not after all those years of torture! At least that also leaves room for some more stories to elaborate the healing process and all that (like a "10 years later" kind of story, maybe?)

I wouldn't mind reading some more backstory to that relationship... it's very creepy but also quite interesting.

I hope you're having a nice afternoon and the kids behave!

[cenea]

Just got back - it was all fun but exhausting. Four hours of kiddies was more than enough...I need my TT boys and slash to calm me down!!!

Yeah, I would like to explore some 'aftermath' and back story...although I think I also need a little break from this world first. Because I like evil and creepy, backstory is likely, though...plus, I kind of want to write some of the 'other' Mark/Robbie backstory, although it might be veeeeeeeeeeery sad :(

[asilia]

Oh I would love to read some more about the 'other' Mark and Robbie - and you know I don't mind sad. I can imagine you'll need a bit of a break though but it's not like you can't go back to this universe at some later date, after more elves and pirates and whatever ;)

[cenea]

I definitely want to explore that, probably for quite a limited audience... If I can take the sadness!! Haha, yeah, but more elves first...