Nov 02, 2011 21:00
Beginning word count: 2,074! :D
Ending word count: 4,360!
First line: "Fine," Matty grumbled, "I might've run some kid's gym shorts up the flag pole."
Last line: It was more than just the erasure of the wounds on her back as she restarted her loop.
Favorite line: I'll admit it, I'm dumb sometimes. I can't help it, it's actually a common trait amongst us human beings.
I have no idea why there are ghosts. It doesn't fit with the planned plot at all, but I guess at least it isn't ninjas yet. When I get to ninjas, you'll know I'm desperate.
nano,
writing