I feel very nervous about this...
So, I occasionally write poetry. I showed one to coeurdesoleil and she liked it, so I thought I'd share some of them with the rest of you. All of these were originally written in Finnish and I translated them, so hopefully they still make sense.
( Here be poetry )
( Here be poetry )
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Not only do I like all of them: I LOVE all of them. I think your poetry is very evocative, and your imagery is incredibly tactile. You describe different kinds of touch, or the lack thereof, so vividly and the poems are infused with longing, with heartache in a way that really speak to me.
In addition to the first one, I particularly like the "The rain spells your name.." and the "My skin is falling away from me" poems, but really they are all excellent and poignant, and I think you should consider trying to get them published.
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