Okay,
Farewells, the new
Passages chapter, is up on my site and also at HASA. So Elf!smut readers, hie you hence. *shameless begging* Feedback? I'm fully aware of the limitations of the story's construction, are the characters and the sex scenes still working?
I've also just revised an old Haldir story,
Responsibility, as well, but both
julifolo and
anglachel1 think - and I agree with them - that it's no good as a stand-alone, certainly not for HASA submission at this time. Not enough Elven culture - change a few names and details and it would fit in modern-day US just as well. But, oh well, it does something for me as the author in giving me background for the character.
Got some good RL chores done today, and have been working on HASA tutorials and FAQs for the new site. I'd better get back to that, actually, as I'd like to have them fully drafted before I head for bed. SO has a bad cold and is already asleep.