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[kapers_in_pink]

Title: Live a Little
Pairings: Cedric/Hermione
Summary:  Sometimes you have to take a risk.
Rating: Uh... PG... maybe PG-13?
Disclaimer: Me. No. Own.
Warning: It is just some fluff... nothing too serious :)

it's my first time actually completely writing a fic (hp or otherwise) and certainly the first time I've posted something publically...  It wasn't

Comments

[kiwistrawberry7]

Tehe ^.^ very, very, very cute! lol, I really liked it.

[kapers_in_pink]

my first ever public approval comment. Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it.

[crzywritermindi]

"She was looking down at the floor as she was talking, a deep red tint staining her TEETH."

Just thought I'd point out that little error...I think you meant "cheeks," unless her lipstick is really, really susceptible to smearing. :P

Otherwise, very well done... I think you did the prompt justice. :)

[kapers_in_pink]

Yeah, I noticed that, and I did mean cheeks. I'm usually pretty good at noticing my errors, since I read them over about 6 or 7 times, I just got lazy. Thanks for pointing it out, I'll head over and fix that :)