Fic - Are You Challenging Me?

[cattygabriel]

The wonderful grace_descends , aka Lucifer, requested this prompt for this meme. I hope you like it, dear! <3

Betaed for me by sunflower_mynah . <3

The song of the Host is inspired by the Music of the Ainur in JRR Tolkien’s The Silmarillion. God’s [first] question and Lucifer’s [first] answer are adapted from the Qur’an.

Are You Challenging Me?

Comments

[halosphere]

Awwwww!

The descriptive imagery of this is so beautiful and then that last line...!
I almost hear Dun! Dun! Duuuuuuun!

And we all know what became of him 3:

Great work!

[cattygabriel]

I could have sworn I replied to this. o_O

XD Thank you. <3 Yes, it makes me sad too; we all know what became of him. ;_;

Thank you! <3

[divine_tempest]

Oh Lucifer. Your pride shall be your downfall. *wibbles*

I think that's what I love most about this, the pride. It is so very much Lucifer, very much grace_descends. The "should I alter Thy work" comment is very similar to an argument he used with Uriel, so it definitely rings true to character.

And how telling is it that we both wrote prompts about Lucifer's pride? XD

(One thing that may be a typo but I don't think it is: "if thou canst defeat me" refers to Michael, yes? Otherwise I would think the "thou" should be capitalized.)

[cattygabriel]

I was wibbling while writing it. ;_;

Awww, thank you. I was hoping to convey his pride, so I'm glad it's visible. :D

XD Very! Oh, Lucifer. <3

Yes, it does refer to Michael. xD But thank you!

[divine_tempest]

*wibbles again* ;__;

I don't think it's possible to write Lucifer without visible pride. I'm pretty sure his pride comes with a giant blinking neon sign that can be seen from other solar systems. XD

XD XD

:D That's what I thought, but I wanted to make sure.

[cattygabriel]

;_; *hugs Lucifer*

XDDD Nice way of putting it!

<3