Ficlet: Grounded, K/L

Nov 01, 2009 01:21

 
Grounded, K/L )

lee, kara, fic

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daybreak777 November 1 2009, 00:29:33 UTC
Aww! I love this. There was something quiet and heartbreaking about it. He cares so much, but can't let her know. And she's worried and can't let him know.

She looks uncomfortable for a brief moment, then turns on Starbuck
Yes, exactly this. There was always that moment before Starbuck slipped into place. Not everyone could see it, but clearly you did.

Well done. :-)

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cattm November 1 2009, 18:03:05 UTC
Thanks so much! This was just what I was aiming for, so I'm happy that came through. : )

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kellychameleon3 November 1 2009, 11:40:10 UTC
Very nice. What a lovely little moment between them.

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cattm November 1 2009, 18:03:33 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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rayruz November 1 2009, 12:52:24 UTC
Oh my goodness, I think I might just cry... that was so sweet.

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cattm November 1 2009, 18:04:33 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

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thrace_adama November 1 2009, 14:17:24 UTC
Oh, this is wonderful! I'm so happy to see you writing again, because I really love your voice.

”Don’t worry”, he says. ”We’ll get you back up there.”

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cattm November 1 2009, 18:05:32 UTC
Aww, you're so sweet! *blushes*

I'm really glad you liked it, and as always, thanks for reading what I write.

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cosetteferaud November 1 2009, 14:55:00 UTC
This is so lovely. Pilots always communicate like this, right?, always trying not to reveal too much :) Love the last line, very sweet and something Lee'd say, imo. He cares so much about Kara.

Very nice!

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cattm November 1 2009, 18:09:00 UTC
Yeah, pilots mainly speak by not telling each other things, I think. They say simple things with lots of hidden meanings, some even unapparent to the one who says it. I'm glad you liked it and didn't find it out of character.

(I'm pondering a short birthday ficlet for you, so don't give up hope just yet. It just needs to mature a bit first.)

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cosetteferaud November 1 2009, 21:06:43 UTC
A birthday fic! Oh, I'd love it, my darling! (I am so happy that you are writing again! :)).

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