Re: Dean/Castiel, protectiveness + h/c (sorta), PG13 or PG (sorry for the lack of porn ;_;) 3/3catoasapunApril 20 2010, 17:53:04 UTC
First, never apologize for lack of porn! It's not a necessity, especially when you've written something so fucking wonderful and OMG SWEET!
OH, HONEY. OH MY GOD THIS. THIS. ♥ ♥ ♥
I adore how you did it from Castiel's POV, how you tied together every major point in their, er, relationship, and showed how Castiel's affections have come to be. It was so damn beautiful, it really showed how much Dean has come to mean to him.
“I apologize for what I told you in front of the warehouse,” he says then. “I was… distressed. And angry. And… I think I felt betrayed. But I shouldn’t have said that. And maybe I should have been less harsh,” he adds as his hand moves away from the shoulder and his thumb brushes against the swell on Dean’s lips. The one he put there. This is, I think, my favorite bit. That scene in front of the warehouse kinda tore my heart up a little, and this makes it okay. It makes it okay because, fuck, IT MAKES SENSE. Castiel retaliating because he was hurt and worried and felt let down by someone he put all his faith in... YES. Just. YES.
THE ENDING. Oh, fuck, it was so sweet. So perfect. I actually like that it didn't immediately turn into porn - this was sweet and unsure and then, in the end, indulgent. Apologies and gentle kisses make my heart melt all over the place and this? THIS WAS PERFECT.
Thank you sooooo much for writing something so wonderful, sweetheart. GOD I LOVE IT. It was, in a word, perfect. <33333333333333333333 Thank you!
Re: Dean/Castiel, protectiveness + h/c (sorta), PG13 or PG (sorry for the lack of porn ;_;) 3/3janie_tangerineApril 20 2010, 23:15:59 UTC
EEE, THANK YOU!! :D I started with the idea of turning it porn-y but then in the end it just felt better if I didn't, so good to know it worked well anyway!! :D
AND AW, THANKS AGAIN! *is flattered*
Castiel was so fun to write, even if I started the middle part twice because he didn't want to cooperate *looks badly*, but I just really wanted to do it from his POV. I just figured he'd be surprised himself at it, in the beginning at least, and then it kind of wrote itself.
And yeah while that scene was wanting to make me cry I sort of really could see where the poor guy/angel/whatever was coming from, but I'd really like it if they would both apologize in canon. I doubt it'll happen but one can hope, right?
Plus YAY IF YOU LIKED THE ENDING because for some reason I think I suck at blatant sweet scenes but I really just wanted it to be nice, plain h/c of the c > h kind, so reading the response totally made my evening. ;) THANKS AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
OH, HONEY. OH MY GOD THIS. THIS. ♥ ♥ ♥
I adore how you did it from Castiel's POV, how you tied together every major point in their, er, relationship, and showed how Castiel's affections have come to be. It was so damn beautiful, it really showed how much Dean has come to mean to him.
“I apologize for what I told you in front of the warehouse,” he says then. “I was… distressed. And angry. And… I think I felt betrayed. But I shouldn’t have said that. And maybe I should have been less harsh,” he adds as his hand moves away from the shoulder and his thumb brushes against the swell on Dean’s lips. The one he put there.
This is, I think, my favorite bit. That scene in front of the warehouse kinda tore my heart up a little, and this makes it okay. It makes it okay because, fuck, IT MAKES SENSE. Castiel retaliating because he was hurt and worried and felt let down by someone he put all his faith in... YES. Just. YES.
THE ENDING. Oh, fuck, it was so sweet. So perfect. I actually like that it didn't immediately turn into porn - this was sweet and unsure and then, in the end, indulgent. Apologies and gentle kisses make my heart melt all over the place and this? THIS WAS PERFECT.
Thank you sooooo much for writing something so wonderful, sweetheart. GOD I LOVE IT. It was, in a word, perfect. <33333333333333333333 Thank you!
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AND AW, THANKS AGAIN! *is flattered*
Castiel was so fun to write, even if I started the middle part twice because he didn't want to cooperate *looks badly*, but I just really wanted to do it from his POV. I just figured he'd be surprised himself at it, in the beginning at least, and then it kind of wrote itself.
And yeah while that scene was wanting to make me cry I sort of really could see where the poor guy/angel/whatever was coming from, but I'd really like it if they would both apologize in canon. I doubt it'll happen but one can hope, right?
Plus YAY IF YOU LIKED THE ENDING because for some reason I think I suck at blatant sweet scenes but I really just wanted it to be nice, plain h/c of the c > h kind, so reading the response totally made my evening. ;) THANKS AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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