Weekend post

Oct 06, 2008 11:54

This weekend was pretty fun ( Read more... )

weekend, friends, david, birthday, wal-mart

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wyldkyss October 6 2008, 17:07:08 UTC
AAAAAH your paragraphs are so long I gave up reading this long post :P

I gathered you went to the fair before I stopped... I'll be posting some pictures of the rides at night whenever I get to editing them :)

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catgoddess October 6 2008, 18:20:48 UTC
Yeah. We went to the fair on Sat. evening.
You could just scan it :P

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wyldkyss October 6 2008, 18:30:50 UTC
I go kinda cross-eyed at long blocks of text :P

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sheerdark October 6 2008, 18:44:30 UTC
We really need to beat the importance of the paragraph into her at some point.

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catgoddess October 6 2008, 18:55:02 UTC
I was putting stuff that happened in one day in one paragraph. That's what you're supposed to do :P

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sheerdark October 6 2008, 18:58:39 UTC
No, no - You separate via topics. Not just one day. Hell, you can separate via important points in the overarching statement.

Like so.

Because it adds more emphasis.

And here I'm going to start talking about cooking something, because it has nothing to do with the previous topic and therefor enables me to pull up a new paragraph.

I mean, look at most of the rest of the peeps on your friends list - How many Wall 'o Text posts do you see? ;P

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catgoddess October 6 2008, 19:18:28 UTC
Fine! I'll fix it then :P

Better? If not, then y'all don't have to read it. :P

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