um. I just want something where harry keeps doing things like the pics below, trying to get niall's attention but niall is kind of oblivious. so harry steps up his game.
so um, this is my first 1d fic ever, and it came out kind of weird, and it's not betaed or brit-picked so sorry for that. okay, i'm going to stop stalling and post it and then go...hide...over there.
don't mind the fall
Niall is seriously the slowest kid on the block. They always make fun of Liam for being slow on the uptake, but Liam could have learned particles physics - Liam could have learned how to spell - in the time Harry's spent waiting for Niall to buy a clue.
It isn't as if Harry's been especially subtle. Harry doesn't know how to be subtle. It's one of his more endearing qualities. He knows because Louis always gives him shit for it, and in Louis-speak that means he likes it
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After they've finished lunch, and after Louis's stopped coughing and they've got the redness down in his eyes, Harry redoubles his efforts to get Niall's attention. He probably crosses the line between 'playful seduction' to 'all out annoyance', but it's not his fault Niall is thick
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"Of course I was being serious," Harry replies, wounded. "Why wouldn't I have been serious?"
"You're never serious!"
"I am so! My god, Niall, I told you I fancied you."
"You tell people you and Louis are married. You grabbed Liam's crotch three times today!"
"Yeah, but I grabbed yours too! And I tried to kiss you and you ducked."
"Harry," Niall sighs, hands up near his shoulders like he doesn't know what to do with them to signal just how exasperated he is, "you try to kiss everyone. How was I supposed to know it was different?"
"I…" Harry faulters, brows dipping to meet in consternation. "I don't know. It just was. I knew it was."
"Well then that makes one of us," Niall says dryly.
"Two. I told Louis."
"Oh, excellent, you told Louis. You managed to let Louis know you liked me, but not me
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so glad you enjoyed it! i'm sorry there wasn't any porn... i kept shaking it, trying to get to knock the porn out, but instead louis choked on salad. clearly they broke my brain.
love love LOVED IT! I love how Harry tries and tries and TRIES but Niall just never even thinks it could be anything more than the ridiculousness they all are with each other and the end was PERFECT! Great job!
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don't mind the fall
Niall is seriously the slowest kid on the block. They always make fun of Liam for being slow on the uptake, but Liam could have learned particles physics - Liam could have learned how to spell - in the time Harry's spent waiting for Niall to buy a clue.
It isn't as if Harry's been especially subtle. Harry doesn't know how to be subtle. It's one of his more endearing qualities. He knows because Louis always gives him shit for it, and in Louis-speak that means he likes it ( ... )
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"You're never serious!"
"I am so! My god, Niall, I told you I fancied you."
"You tell people you and Louis are married. You grabbed Liam's crotch three times today!"
"Yeah, but I grabbed yours too! And I tried to kiss you and you ducked."
"Harry," Niall sighs, hands up near his shoulders like he doesn't know what to do with them to signal just how exasperated he is, "you try to kiss everyone. How was I supposed to know it was different?"
"I…" Harry faulters, brows dipping to meet in consternation. "I don't know. It just was. I knew it was."
"Well then that makes one of us," Niall says dryly.
"Two. I told Louis."
"Oh, excellent, you told Louis. You managed to let Louis know you liked me, but not me ( ... )
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A++ on your first 1D fic!! Please be to continuing writing more in the future!! :D
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