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Jan 27, 2005 06:52

I have this problem, I love writing poetry.
But I hate doing it for school.

I re-wrote my nonsense poem, into a different poem...

indigo thoughts on indigo paper [10]
buttons pressed annoyed the painter [10]

scrunched together in a nook [8]
limp like childish dreams down a brook [8]

tart not blinking [4]
the scarf's malarkey shrinking [8]

indigo thoughts on indigo paper [10]
buttons pressed annoyed the painter [10]

into:

Indigo thoughts on indigo paper
buttons press, annoyed the painter.

His heart no bigger than a nail,
but her love for him went stale.

'how to start?' she's thinking
all their time was sinking.

Indigo thoughts on indigo paper,
buttons pressed annoyed the painter.

Ohhh, poetry. ♥
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