fic // tvxq // our little princess #12
Title: Our Little Princess
Author: catachrestical
Keywords: Bandfic; hints of JaeHo and YooSu; some original characters.
Rating: PG13 for few language mishaps.
Disclaimer: Do not own, did not happen.
Notes: There are orphaned children and there is TVXQ, who had to go through hell and back to acquire them.
First version beta'd by janeberryblue; current version re-beta'd by bel_chan ( Read more... )
Author: catachrestical
Keywords: Bandfic; hints of JaeHo and YooSu; some original characters.
Rating: PG13 for few language mishaps.
Disclaimer: Do not own, did not happen.
Notes: There are orphaned children and there is TVXQ, who had to go through hell and back to acquire them.
First version beta'd by janeberryblue; current version re-beta'd by bel_chan ( Read more... )
This was really a good chapter, I really enjoyed it! I liked the way you described things from Kaneko's perspective when the boys and JooEun came to pick her up! The meeting between Changmin and Akira, ooh that was classic. ♥ It was really heartwarming and happy and sad and oh man. That's my most favorite scene of all.
Second would be. . .*drumroll* Yoochun's Do I make you happy? Ugh, what a brilliant line, and directed to Junsu at that. I think my heart fell at that scene ^^;; I've always thought of Yoosu as that carefree kind of love, so I really like the way you describe the progress of their relationship~
Third. . . would be the last scene between Jae Joong and Yunho, in which I would agree with Yoochun that those two just need to hook up. ^^ It took me a while to picture how Yunho's position was - on his stomach with his head on Jae Joong's HEART - and then BAM, when I finally pictured it, I was smiling THIIIIIIIIIIISSSSS big because that has got to be one of the sweetest scenes I've ever read. :) So, thanks!
I really wished this was longer. XD I will wait patiently for your next update, I can't wait! HWAITING! I'm going to return to the other chapters to read them again. :P
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:3; I don't describe chapters from the kids' POVs usually because it's a little difficult, yes. They're 6 and 2 years old and sometimes you just don't know how developed their minds are and how to make it believable so people buy it xD But I'm glad you loved that scene :3 I loved it too!
... 8D Again, very glad you liked it. I had troubles deciding if that sounded good or not. I'm still not sure even now.
XDD That seems to be the crowd's favorite. Thank you for telling me that :3 I love knowing that I can make my readers smile and all that.
♥ Thanks for reading and reviewing, yes.
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