Por tu amor... Me he convertido en asesino. *Fanfiction. Sylar/Mohinder. 1/?*

[cat_2worlds]

Es la segunda fanfiction que yo post en aquí...entonces, espero que ustedes a van a gustarla.

Y, por favor, estoy aprendo español entonces, me encantaría muchos si pudierais decirme las cuales son mis errores. Muchas gracias.

Deja un comentario, por favor. Me gusta mucho.

Y gracias a mi Beta *Ariadnechan!!* Besos y brazos! :D Muchas gracias!

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[ariadnechan]

wow please send me the english version and i can beta you in spanish
you soy látina ;)

pero hay varias cosas que no entiendo para betearlo como esta

que genial que escribas en francés, castellano e inglés ;)

[cat_2worlds]

I wrote it directly in Spanish :S *That's my way to learn new languages xD*. MUCHAS GRACIAS :D!! *hugs her spanish beta!*

Es muy interesante:D Que tù eres latina.. :D *Y perdon para los acentos pero a mi escuela, no tienen los buenos ...''keyboards'' xDDDD*

Que no entiendes? ...

:D Si! Es genial y gracias para tu que genial ^^!!! lol ;)! No sabia que tu habias notado eso xD.. LOL! :P Es ...cool *facepalm* *Palabras me hacian falta..LOL*

Es toda una sorpresa :D! No sabia que tu eras latina :D!!!!! *Y gracias para seguir a mi y leer a mis fics.*

[ariadnechan]

yo hago lo mismo!!!
yo también empece a escribir en inglés directo y al principio nadie me entendía nada

mi problema es que tu uso de "para" por ejemplo es incorrecto y eso me hace difícil enter lo que quieres decir
bagajes?? te refieres a maleta o a un ropero?
Tu uso de "la, lo, los, las" y tu forma de armar oraciones también tiene problemas lo que complica que entienda lo que querás decir

por eso si me haces un resumen en inglés puedo beteartelo de aquí a mañana

:)

y tú de dónde eres???

[cat_2worlds]

Oh I see o.O *I mostly understood what you said I just ...cannot reply to you this much in Spanish xD*

It's true, I KNOW I got a problem with para but I don't understand HOW to use it :(!.... Bagajes : luggage. It's like he's packing their bags.

armar oraciones?... la lo los las it's true too, I got problems. But I consider myself good still xD LOL!

You know what I'll do? ..I will send the English version *I'll translate it to English* tomorrow. Okay?! :D Or after-tomorrow but soon enough that's for sure. Is that good?! :D And thank you A LOT!

I love in Canada, Québec ^^! And you? *It's just that my passion is Languages so that's why :P!!!!!! ;) *

[ariadnechan]

armar oraciones "make sentences?"

and don't worry i will show you my first fanpoem in english and you will see that i'm a lot better now, your system is what i did to do it better, makes you think in the new language, translating is never the same!

and you are good!!

but you can get better for sure!

and wow three languages

i have only 2 and i can understand Portuguese and Italian, but not to write or talk them,
i can understand some speak Japanese but only as a child could i know words and some basic sentence structure

I'm from Chile!
is a large and slim country beside Argentina who end up in the end of south of the world

so we have different climates

desert, mediterranean, and winters with a lot of snow in the south (like north US i think)

[ariadnechan]

My e-mail

elsie.vengas@yahoo.com :)

[cat_2worlds]

Ah, thank you! :D

[cat_2worlds]

Ahh I see xD Yeah I know :(! They don,t sound totally natural but I'll fix that with practice xD LOL!

HAHA xD Really?! :P Ahhh I wanna see it ^^! *your poem* I'm sure! Exactly :O! I totally think the same!!! *shakes hands* I'm so glad to meet someone else who thinks like that!

Thanks *shy* :D

That's for sure xD

Yep! :)

I think that when a person knows more than one, it's already awesome so :)! ^^

Chile! Wouh! I once had a friend who was from there too :P! That's cool!

Yeah, that's for sure :O! *yep for the winters, we got loads of snow too ^^! LOL That might be the only resemblance we got for the climates xD LOL*