Hero - Drabble Challenge *Heroes Contest* (In the Shadows)

Aug 30, 2010 11:46


Title: Hero
Author: Cat_2Worlds
Rating: G
Characters: Sylar
Summary: Sylar is thinking about how it feels like to be a villain and comes to a conclusion. It's an introspection into Sylar's head.
Word count: 565
Spoilers/Warnings: A bit for Season 4 , episode 18 : The Wall.
Notes: Written for drabble challenge # 24 at Read more... )

cat_2worlds, heroes_contest, sylar, drabble challenge 24

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game_byrd September 3 2010, 11:00:55 UTC
Eh, it's okay. I like the subject - Sylar's introspective considering his own motives, and it's not too maudlin or angsty, which I don't think Sylar would be. He's a very practical guy. The writing is a bit choppy, but I'm not really sure what to suggest for that, because your grammar and spelling are fine. In fact, I'm pleased to see you use semi-colons correctly. Few people do.

:)

Thanks for writing!

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cat_2worlds September 3 2010, 18:50:46 UTC
:)! I'm happy you do! Yeah, I tried to dose it..not too dark but...that explained it all :). Haha lol thank you xD *for the grammar and spelling* :P.

Oh yeah! O_O I LOVE to use semi-colons! And you're right :O! Not many people know how to use that and it's a shame! D: I don't know why they don't get it... :(

Welcome! :D It's a real pleasure!

And thank you A LOOOOT for commenting :D! Makes me all happy inside ^^!!!! See ya! :D

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jackvelvet September 15 2010, 20:14:32 UTC
I like this little snippet of Sylar's brain. ^_^

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cat_2worlds September 15 2010, 23:24:12 UTC
Awwww :D I'm glad to learn that! Thank you very much for the comment :D!

And glad to see ya around ^^

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paynesgrey September 17 2010, 20:57:37 UTC
Interesting introspection in this. Good job.

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cat_2worlds September 18 2010, 00:55:18 UTC
Thank you very much! :) Glad you like this! (And I loooove your icon xD LOL :D He's so cute! :) )

Thanks for commenting :)!!!!

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