Title: Polarity Author: castmeaway Artist: reni_m Beta: piscaria Pairing: A/M Rating: nc-17 Warnings: dub-con and [character death]character death: Uther and Morgause Word Count: ~33,00 Summary: A Camelot still reeling from Morgana’s betrayal plays host to the visiting king of the only nation militant enough to pose a viable threat. Only, a surprising twist is revealed when the heirless king of
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I really enjoyed this story. (Loved the switching viewpoint between Merlin and Arthur so that you could see where each of them were coming from in their reactions.)
Great idea for Balinor's backstory as well, that seemed to fit in so well with his character in the show, I could see that happening and turning him into who he was.
I'm glad that the switching POVs worked. I was a little worried, and I know there was a bit of repetion in some scenes because of it...but I really wanted to delve into their emotions and reactions (something that I wish we got more of in the show sometimes).
It was a really wonderful story. Read it in one day (and got nothing else today done). I love the twist of the story. Everytime when I thought, I figured the plot out, there was something new. Wonderful.
thank you so much for your comment (sorry I didn't get back to you sooner, my lj was having issues). I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my story though.
I hope this didn't distract you from anything too important though...
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Maybe you might want to put a link to this masterpost on your paperlegend entry?
Anyway CONGRATS!!! I'm reading this right now!
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Fixed now.
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Great idea for Balinor's backstory as well, that seemed to fit in so well with his character in the show, I could see that happening and turning him into who he was.
Lovely!
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I'm glad that the switching POVs worked. I was a little worried, and I know there was a bit of repetion in some scenes because of it...but I really wanted to delve into their emotions and reactions (something that I wish we got more of in the show sometimes).
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I hope this didn't distract you from anything too important though...
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