The Naughty Nap

May 02, 2012 21:47

Title The Naughty Nap
Author castmeaway
Beta jelazakazone
Rating NC-17
Pairing Arthur/Merlin
Word Count 1,500
Warnings None, unless you count pure smut as a warning.
Summary After a long morning, Arthur just wants to take a nap. Merlin makes it...hard.
A/N This was written for ella_bane, because she is awesome.

ETA: venivincere wrote a little extra to this featuring George. And the sheets ( Read more... )

merlin, fic

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happyevraftr May 3 2012, 02:26:32 UTC
This story was so adorable! I loved the languorous feel it had. Very hot and sweet ♥

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castmeaway May 3 2012, 20:57:22 UTC
thank you!

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steamyaffair May 3 2012, 02:26:48 UTC
Oh Hell YEAH nap time is the best thing ever!!

So hot! Loved this!

Arthur is 'goal oriented.'

*snort*

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castmeaway May 3 2012, 20:57:49 UTC
I figure that about sums Arthur up ;)

I'm glad you liked this!

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jelazakazone May 3 2012, 02:32:37 UTC
Nap time is the best thing ever;) This was cute and fluffy and HOT. I think maybe my fluff is rubbing off on you:D

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castmeaway May 3 2012, 20:58:28 UTC
It really really is bb! thanks again for all your help.

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jelazakazone May 3 2012, 20:59:57 UTC
Hee hee. Happy to help and I'm thrilled to see my fluff rubbing off on other people:) I see that Ella loved it, as I predicted, and I am quite happy about that too.

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k_nightfox May 3 2012, 03:13:11 UTC
Love the slow build up, how Merlin is "insatiable" and can (and apparently will) stroke himself for hours just for the gentle, lazy pleasure of it. It makes sense to me that Arthur would be the "goal oriented" one. I think you kept them quite in character and I loved the languorous feel of the piece. Lovely

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castmeaway May 3 2012, 20:59:08 UTC
Oh Merlin SOO does.

I'm so glad you felt they were in character!

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geekslave May 3 2012, 03:17:10 UTC
Short, sweet, and hot! You did a great job of effectively describing how bone tired Arthur was but, when you've got a naked Merlin lying next to you sleep is going to become the furthest thing from your mind. Love how happy with himself Arthur was when it occurred to him how to make Merlin come. I wish my nap time included a naked Merlin. :)

Stacey

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castmeaway May 3 2012, 20:59:42 UTC
I totally wish that I had a naked Merlin hanging around my bed too!

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