Thank you to
grey_bard for beta (actually, for reading the same damn scenes slightly edited over and over for months; by the way, I made a few more little changes right before I finally uploaded it) and fight choreography, and
caithion for beta.
Breaking Point I'll be archiving it on my own site soon, but I'm lazy about that.
This means I get to be part of this year's Yuletide Challenge! I'm evilly plotting what kind of fic I will demand request.