I loved Behavioral Modification and I see what connection you mean here. And I loved your story here! I felt like I was in Sherlock's mind and there was a time when I really thought Just why DOESN'T John get it? :) The conclusion was wonderfully drawn and to have that scene on the stairs is briliant! Guess Sherlock and John agree. <3
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You should write the antecedent. The (failed) seducing. ^^ And John thinking he's going mad XD
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Probably not what you were hoping for, but thanks for suggesting it!
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And I loved your story here! I felt like I was in Sherlock's mind and there was a time when I really thought Just why DOESN'T John get it? :)
The conclusion was wonderfully drawn and to have that scene on the stairs is briliant! Guess Sherlock and John agree. <3
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