counterpoint; chapter three.

[casi_casi]

Title: Counterpoint
Chapter: 3 of 4
Characters: David Silva / David Villa; Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres; Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: AU. A story told out of time in twelve parts; here are the next three. Apologies for the wait.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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Comments

[katie_andrea]

wow, i love that Silva/Villa and Sernando stories are connected..it makes it exciting ;)

the Iker/Silva scene was funny..come on tiny Silva, why don't you just admit it that you and Villa are together and more than just fuck buddies or whatever ;)

and Fernando - he is an emotional timebomb! and Silva is a close second! i mean, why are they (Silva and Fernando) like that? why don't they own up to their feelings and acknowledge that they need them (Villa and Sergio)? For sure they'll be shattered and feeling empty if their significant others will be gone..

i love your Sergio, idk, maybe because i strongly believe that we should appreciate the simple things in our lives? and also maybe because i believe that the best way to live life is just exactly what Sergio is doing? and i want Fernando to stop him from leaving - it's about him this time, make him feel loved!

as for Silva, he comes to me as a little heartless of a person huh.. it's like he's too scared to commit and admit when in fact Villa is making him feel the marvels of tenderness (lol..what?).. i feel like he's too secured that Villa will always come back to him like a puppy so he's so full of pride and if ever Villa won't come back to him, he can just pretend that the thing between was nothing serious after all..

i want Silva and Villa to need each other, and for them to show it! also for Fernando and Sergio too, most especially Sergio

*here's to hoping for a happy ending for both pairings* ;)

[casi_casi]

Oh, all the stories are connected.

Thanks so much for reading and for the thorough feedback! It's always interesting to hear what people think of the characters. I'm glad you like Sergio, and I'm sorry you think Silva is heartless (I just think he's terrified).

[katie_andrea]

right..i think he's just scared, given his personality here, he's not one to invest much on emotions..

so i take it back, i don't think he's heartless, just, like you said, terrified ;)