traces, part eight (a).
Title: Traces
Part: 8 of 10
Characters: David Beckham, Martín Cáceres, Fabio Cannavaro, Iker Casillas, Royston Drenthe, Julien Faubert, Fernando Gago, Raúl González, Pep Guardiola, Thierry Henry, Guti Hernández, Xavi Hernández, Gonzalo Higuaín, Andrés Iniesta, Bojan Krkić, Lionel Messi, Ruud van Nistelrooy, Gerard Piqué, Carles Puyol, Sergio Ramos ( Read more... )
Part: 8 of 10
Characters: David Beckham, Martín Cáceres, Fabio Cannavaro, Iker Casillas, Royston Drenthe, Julien Faubert, Fernando Gago, Raúl González, Pep Guardiola, Thierry Henry, Guti Hernández, Xavi Hernández, Gonzalo Higuaín, Andrés Iniesta, Bojan Krkić, Lionel Messi, Ruud van Nistelrooy, Gerard Piqué, Carles Puyol, Sergio Ramos ( Read more... )
Hee, I loved reading this comment. Thanks so much for taking the time to write it. I know it's trying to sit down and list the individual things that you enjoyed about a fic, but I'm so grateful that you did. As always, you're so giving with your feedback. I love seeing what parts of the fic resonate with you, which parts you find entertaining, because they're never what I expect! I guess I put in little touches to keep myself interested and - for those who want to read this story a second time - make it a little more multi-layered, and it's great to see which of those details stand out to you (like the word "bangin'"!).
I want Raúl and Guti to resolve their issues and have hot sex as well! I think I'll need to write some Raúl/Guti fic after I'm done with Traces, because there are so many images in my head of those two that just need to be written down, lol.
When Beckham left the Union, he left a free spot which was filled by Bojan. Guti was unaware that Bojan had joined the Union (until this chapter, after the interview with Pep), and has been under the impression that he himself had been the one to fill Beckham's spot. Beckham's gun had gone to Bojan, which is why Guti was yet to receive a gun of his own. The Brass members didn't wait for Guti to arrive before giving Beckham's gun to Beckham, as such. It just worked out that way; Thierry made sure that Bojan was always going to get the gun.
I hope that makes sense. Please feel free to ask away if you have any more questions about that as I'm not sure whether I've explained it fully enough.
And dammit, I keep making typos. What the hell, this isn't like me. *edits*
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