Believe Me I'm Lying - Prologue

Oct 04, 2011 21:08

Dusk was falling on a cold November evening when they were leaving the Luke Snyder Foundation, heading towards the apartment building he had moved into with his boyfriend only four months ago. His whole body was tense and he had to remind himself to breathe as they got closer and closer to the apartment. He carefully moved his slightly red and ( Read more... )

fic: believe me i'm lying, pairing: luke/reid

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nancygrew October 7 2011, 05:31:11 UTC
Very interesting premise and a nice job showing Luke's fear and desperation.

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dpracket October 7 2011, 11:41:31 UTC
Poor Luke.

Great start!

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joann414 October 7 2011, 13:30:38 UTC
Wondering who the asshole is that has Luke. Great beginning

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petuniagirl October 7 2011, 13:36:09 UTC
So intriguing!

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drunkyluke October 11 2011, 20:11:46 UTC
what's this then? oooh, i don't know. this is gonna be goood!!! here we go!!

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