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seventy-two, kris/kai

Dec 11, 2012 04:45

Seventy-Two
kris/kai, nc-17, 7,748w
the classic fuck-or-die scenario: exo get captured and locked up. they've got 72 hours to find a way out of this... by fucking each other. (obviously the pwp version of 48 Hours.)
warnings: dub/noncon

( Kris flexes his fingers slowly, trying not to look at the number inked on his skin. Numbered, like cattle in a farm. )

i've got nothing, um

Comments 46

idolkiller December 13 2012, 02:17:08 UTC

yessss i'm so pleased this is unlocked for easy access, I REALLY LIKE THE SET UP with the only 2 members drugged (CONVENIENTLY two members that a lot of the band are attached to?? so i guess they can't be like lol ok just die) and you built the tension really well!! and sold a pairing that i normally don't think about *__* also ;~; at jongin's praying XCUSE ME WOW pain everywhere ;;;;;; i pray 4 continuations

carvone December 13 2012, 02:39:11 UTC

so i guess they can't be like lol ok just die
dead omg.

...Who's the one everyone would be all "lol ok just die"?? ...Wait, no, don't answer that, crying (because the answer occurred to me after I asked...)

Yes please be continuing, I shall anticipate. ❁◕ ‿ ◕❁ (Yes looking at you.)

idolkiller December 13 2012, 03:02:24 UTC

CRYING i'm js some are easier to let go than others...... ... ..

WE WILL SEE lj user carvone... i'm returning that anticipation btw /expectant

hipployta December 13 2012, 02:28:13 UTC

Man...just when you thought making the boys kill each other was the worst psychological torture...damn son

I say sasaengs did it

carvone December 16 2012, 04:55:09 UTC

/o\ Either way it isn't a fun ride I suppose... and ofc who did it is up to interpretation...

staygame December 13 2012, 03:41:24 UTC

CRIES @ YOU. I am so delighted that it was you who wrote this, but dang how do you expect anyone to follow it.

carvone December 16 2012, 04:57:48 UTC

Ahhh... I'm a little perplexed as to why it'd be exciting to anyone that it was me who wrote it lmao... but I eagerly await the promised follow-up because this is just the beginning!!

jongupswarrior December 13 2012, 03:42:27 UTC

wowowow, idek what to say because this is absolutely amazing?????

carvone December 16 2012, 04:58:26 UTC

lol thank you for reading!

dragyeol December 13 2012, 04:41:39 UTC

I'm just...my brain broke towards the end. orz

Holy shit, man. I'm scared for the boys but wow. All the emotion throughout the fic was conveyed so well and I love it. As bad as it sounds (because gah, torturing the boys like this is so sadistic), I hope someone continues this verse too. ;;

carvone December 16 2012, 05:00:08 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad some emotion really did come through instead of just the porn tbh..... I hope someone picks it up and it could reach an ending, too. :3