Unfinished Fic

[xlilcrimx]

Saki switches places with Gokai for the sake of love. Unfinished cuz I'm having a bit of writer's block. I know what I want to write, but it's not coming out right. It'll come to me eventually. I might change the title later.

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[yomigaere]

ototou-chan

Actually, it's spelled "otouto." ^^;;

“Oh? You mean like ‘Gokai-ototouchan could you do this for me? Hey, would you be a dear and make sure to pick Kanan up from school? Now excuse me while I go and get distracted by a spoon!’” He mocked. “Like that?”

Saki was not amused and continued leering at her brother’s obnoxious mocking. Two can play that game. “Ohh… Chung-san. I’d be glad to help you with your homework. Oops. I dropped my pen. Better pick it up,” Saki clasped her hands and pretended to blush, “Here, let me bend over and show you how much I want it as if you couldn’t already tell!” The twins exchanged evil glances while grinding their teeth.

ZOMG, I think this was my favorite part. xD Really.

Anyway, I think this is a good ficcu so far. ^o^-

... I really suck at making comments, huh? xD

[xlilcrimx]

I shall fix... later. ¦D; Haha. As long as it's not one of those dreaded one-word comments, I won't complain. XD

[yomigaere]

xD Oh, true. xD Or, at least it wasn't "ZOMG *sapzzz* LIEK tath wuz teh bestest thing evar lolz!1!"

[xlilcrimx]

Or just...

"LOL."

:cringe: >__O;;

[yomigaere]

Or, even shorter:

"hi"

-__-;;