Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: Once More Into the Breach (Criminal Minds, Morgan/Reid, NC17)

carolinecrane

Fic: Once More Into the Breach (Criminal Minds, Morgan/Reid, NC17)

Jan 15, 2009 16:06

Title: Once More Into the Breach
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Reid/Morgan
Rating: NC17
Summary: Derek helps Spencer relax.
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A/N: This was inspired by the fake title provided to me by innerslytherin during the last round ( Read more... )

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Comments 57

cinderlily January 15 2009, 21:29:29 UTC

I will get to the twirl over "I love you" in a moment but first I just want to say that you really got it all in one with the part about NA. Having been to enough meetings I always wonder how much it ends up helping, as most of the time I leave a little twitchy as well. It is entirely why I DON'T go to meetings now.

That being said, OH DEAR LORD. Phone sex (one of my favorites), Derek's voice AND his mom knowing with out him telling her? *clings* I really truly love this. <3

carolinecrane January 16 2009, 13:55:49 UTC

a) I am so relieved to hear that, and thank you for telling me whether or not I was on target. Having never been there myself, I was just inferring what I imagine that experience would be like.

b) I hate writing phone sex! This one was pretty fun, though. I think Derek just makes everything easier. And then it got all romantic at the end. Dorks! Thanks ♥

tobimonkee January 15 2009, 21:40:23 UTC

this is great I especially like that that Morgan's mom could tell he was in love, I think she and his sisters knew he loved Reid before he did

carolinecrane January 16 2009, 13:56:20 UTC

think she and his sisters knew he loved Reid before he did

Of course they did! It's canon :) Thanks.

rabidfan January 15 2009, 22:04:10 UTC

Yum. Just... yum.

carolinecrane January 16 2009, 13:56:42 UTC

Better than cilantro! ;)

rabidfan January 16 2009, 15:14:02 UTC

You're not setting a very high standard for "yum", you know. Just saying.

carolinecrane January 16 2009, 15:16:36 UTC

Says you. Though, okay, you know what I hate? Chopping cilantro. Such a hassle.

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geekchic29 January 15 2009, 22:11:23 UTC

loved it... i could practically hear Morgans incredibly hot voice teasing Spencer...and i love the endind, it was sooo cute! Btw, i love your b&w pic of spencer with the book...hes so flippin' beautiful!

carolinecrane January 16 2009, 14:00:35 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed. That fluffy bit at the end sort of came out of nowhere, but they were being cute so I left it in :)

goddessdster January 15 2009, 22:25:41 UTC

Um, yeah.
I really love your Derek voice. Have I mentioned that? I'll keep saying it. You have a definite ear for his manner of speaking. I love that I can hear his voice saying all those dirty things and it feels just right.

That was awesome.

carolinecrane January 16 2009, 14:02:13 UTC

Thank you, it is very gratifying when someone says they can hear the characters you're writing, as I'm sure you know, so I appreciate it :) I'm not a big fan of writing phone sex, usually, because the pillow talk often comes off sort of cheesy, but it really works for Derek. It helps that he's sex on legs and he's got that voice.