Fic: Famous Cliches (CSI, Nick/Greg, PG)

Oct 02, 2004 17:22

Title: Famous Clichés ( Read more... )

fic: csi, series: surfing, csi, fic

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sassygirl October 2 2004, 16:34:01 UTC
eeee! new fic! *does little greg-esque dance*

I ADORE this line :Nick's smile looked different from close up; predatory, almost, and Greg suppressed a shiver when Nick leaned in and slid a hand into his hair. "Just…this." It made me shiver!
I adore the whole "no talking about your family while taking my clothes off" as well.
ahh, fabulous.

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 19:07:08 UTC
Thanks, I'm very glad you liked.

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miriam October 2 2004, 17:18:02 UTC
Mmmmmm.. that was good.
Where is my ciggie?

I honestly think you have to continue that series.
It's really sweet.
But the extraordinray thing about it is: it makes me physically hot, too.
It's just the words, I don't know.

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 19:07:39 UTC
I'll continue it, it's just taking me longer than I expected it to. But thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying so far.

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miriam October 2 2004, 19:13:56 UTC
Yeah, sure, take your time.
I just want to know what happens.. but I won't hurry or anything.

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spoiledjap October 2 2004, 17:19:39 UTC
Okay I'm going to babble so please for give me.

A) Pairing: Nick/Greg (I always have to suppress the urge to type 'duh' right after that) They’re practically yours now so yea you can write duh after it :)

B) I love how Nick is soo...what’s the word...blind about the whole Greg thing, it took him long enough in canon to realize something so this just makes me laugh even more.

C) This goes along with B, And even that would probably be too subtle for Nick; if Greg really wanted to get the message across he would have had to rent a billboard across the street from Nick's house.

Or maybe a singing telegram, because who knew if Nick ever looked up long enough to notice what was going on around him. He'd had a guy living in his attic, after all, and… Made me laugh so hard I was cryin’

D) Because even things rock and so do you; this is one of my new favorite series :).

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 19:08:45 UTC
Heh. Well they definitely don't belong to me, but they're pretty much the only CSI pairing I ever write, so it seems a little redundant to label it.

Nick's purposely dense about some things, I think, and Greg would definitely be one of them. But eventually even he has to come around. Thanks, glad you enjoyed.

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sillie82 October 2 2004, 17:21:12 UTC
Oh, very nice... Heh, go Nick, for finally noticing. :P <3

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 19:06:47 UTC
He is kind of dense. Thanks.

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ruggerdavey October 2 2004, 17:43:03 UTC
And we'd hate you for this part, why? Now if Greg as actually slammed the door in Nick's face, then I might be annoyed, but they're not pretending it didn't happen, and they're on their way. Becase, as Nick said, "this changes everything."

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 19:06:31 UTC
I figured some people would be angry with me for the fade to black, but I just didn't feel like writing porn. I'm glad it didn't bother you. Thanks.

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miriam October 2 2004, 19:18:20 UTC
Well, we didn't get porn, okay.
But that doesn't mean the guys are doing it without us, right?

(God, that just gives me a bad mental of Nick & Greg getting it on finally and hundreds of hungry eyes luring in the dark.. followed by gasps and giggles..

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 21:19:50 UTC
Well see, that's the thing, because I really can't see two healthy men of their age group spending the night just making out, you know? Even if they don't do *much*, they're going to want to get off. So unless I pick up exactly where I left off (which, right now, is not the plan) then you're missing some sex, yes.

But I could always go back and write that part later as a sort of missing scene for the series when I'm in the mood for first-time porn. It's just that it gets a little old writing the same thing after awhile. I feel like my sex scenes are all exactly the same.

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