Fic: Say Goodnight (WAT, Danny/Martin, NC17)

[carolinecrane]

Let me just start off by saying that phone sex is not really my forte. Without getting all TMI, it doesn't really do it for me. But nekosmuse wanted to read Danny/Martin phone sex, and apparently I am your all-purpose request girl this week

Comments

[stareyednight]

Wow, that was hot. Very very sexy. I should stop reading these on my breaks, but dammit, this is too good to stop.

[carolinecrane]

I should stop writing porn at work, but alas.

[carolinecrane]

Let me take a second to breathe a sigh of relief.

...

There, I feel better now. Seriously, though, thanks very much. I'm so glad you liked this, because I was just amusing myself at work and I had no idea how it was going to turn out. So I'm glad your faith in my was not unfounded.

I don't even know where this came from. I guess Danny just liked your phone sex idea, because Danny never just starts talking to me.

[exitsign]

Dude. Phone sex is hard to write. You did awesome job, though. It was entirely too hot and so very naughty and totally in character. I loved the dirty talk. heh. It's so ridiculous that people actually say those kinds of things that it's almost embarrassing to think about. heh. Ah, well, that was great. Thanks for coming out of your comfort zone.

[carolinecrane]

It's so ridiculous that people actually say those kinds of things

I know. Believe me, I know. And that's why I don't like to write it. Glad it worked for you, though. I don't hate it as much as I hated the one other phone sex fic I wrote, so that's progress, anyway.

[mindyfromohio]

He wants to fuck Martin on Sam's desk, just to prove a point,

hee!

I'm really new to watching this show (after totally being corrupted by you and nekosmuse) but I could hear each of those characters saying the words. I think you're better at dialogue than you think you are, because that was wicked hot.

[carolinecrane]

Sorry about the whole 'making you watch the show' thing. It has its good weeks and its bad weeks. I sort of have a love/hate relationship with it, though, so don't listen to me. I keep swearing I'm never going to write Danny/Martin fic again, and then I do.

I think you're better at dialogue than you think you are

Thanks. I like to use dialogue sparingly, and the whole 'sex talk' thing never really reads right to me when I read other people's fic, so I weasel my way out of writing it a lot because I hate to sound stupid. But with phone sex it's hard to avoid, hence being out of my established comfort zone.

[surexit]

*steams gently*

Phone sex is my One True Kink.

*continues steaming*

[carolinecrane]

That's why I don't write it, because it's not one of my kinks and I worry I won't do it proper justice. So thanks for assuaging my fears a little.