Glee Fic: Equilibrium (a physics experiment)

[caroline_shea]

Title: Equilibrium (a physics experiment)
Author: Caroline-Shea
Rating: I'm saying PG-13 due to subject matter, but if anyone thinks I should up it, please let me know.
Pairing: Kurt/Blaine
Word Count: ~1,900
Spoilers:  Through 2.16 
Warnings: Non-graphic BDSM experimentation (specifically, striking with a belt). Also, I feel I should warn for what

Comments

[mulder1921]

I see what you did there. Like the twist that it was hurting Kurt, totally didn't see that coming.

Well written and a little haunting? I can't think of a better word right now.

[caroline_shea]

I actually consider 'haunting' quite a compliment for this one! Thank you so much. :)

[wanna_be_happy1]

This fic had a good twist. I thought *Kurt* was the one receiving the hits at first, not Blaine. I really like how he used the safe word, even though he wasn't the one being physically handled.

[caroline_shea]

Thank you! I'm glad you didn't see the twist coming (otherwise it would have been a fairly lame twist, I suppose) and I'm glad you liked that Kurt was the one to use the safe word. :)

[wanna_be_happy1]

Me too. I felt a lot more comfortable with it when I realised that Kurt was hitting Blaine and not the other way around. Great fiv.

[lavender_love00]

Okay, I really, really liked this. Normally I have sort of a BDSM squick ... but this had feelings, and I really loved the twist that you put on it there, and of course there's no way Kurt could do that, and of course it was stupid of Blaine to even ask, and ... yeah.

Really really great. And I'm totally not a physics pro or anything, but I loved your little science-y tie-ins there.

[caroline_shea]

I don't have a BDSM squick (shocker, I know) but I honestly *did* squick myself a little writing this.

I'm really, really glad that you gave it a shot even though it's not your thing, and I'm DELIGHTED that you enjoyed it despite that. Thank you so much! :)

[windrider1967]

Nicely done. I like the twist that it was Kurt in the dom position, I was honestly suprised. I liked that he was the one to break, and his reasons for soing so. Just very well written

[caroline_shea]

Thank you so very much! I'm glad the twist caught you by surprise. :)

[etmuse]

...is it wrong that I am now stuck trying to think of what kink Kurt could discover he has that Blaine just finds insane?

[hazyjayne]

*whistles*

I did suggest shoving broccoli up noses....

*whistles*

[caroline_shea]

Oh, YOU. *sticks tongue out*

[caroline_shea]

You'll have to blame me for that one, I'm afraid, lol. As my beta has already expressed to you, she TOTALLY wanted me to put in an example of a ridiculous kink and I foolishly rejected her advice. SHAME ON ME.