FIC: Underneath The Christmas Tree
Title: Underneath the Christmas Tree
Author: carolinablu85
Artist: sarafim
Rating: R to light light NC-17
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Word Count: 2,635
Disclaimer: I own nada.
Summary: I don’t want a lot for Christmas/ there is just one thing I need...
A/N: A merry merry Christmas to all! :) And most especially to our friend ladysonsie, who’s awesome and supportive and funny and sweet ( Read more... )
Author: carolinablu85
Artist: sarafim
Rating: R to light light NC-17
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Word Count: 2,635
Disclaimer: I own nada.
Summary: I don’t want a lot for Christmas/ there is just one thing I need...
A/N: A merry merry Christmas to all! :) And most especially to our friend ladysonsie, who’s awesome and supportive and funny and sweet ( Read more... )
Dude, this is perfect. Mah boys are celebrating Christmas under the tree! And Luke has fucked Noah so hard bb is sleeping and is not waking up. #bottomnoahland is may favorite place in this entire world. A place where things are sparkly and bright and candy canes in bowls and sugar plums on toes. IT IS A PERFECT PLACE.
And I loved how the boys were the boys in this. You really do just have them down so perfectly and I love that but more importantly I appreciate that. Because it means when I read it I not only am enjoying the words but I'm seeing it play out in my mind, like it's on screen.
“You’re such a guy,” he whispers. “Isn’t it kinda cliché to fall asleep right after sex?” He uses his other hand to card through Noah’s hair again. “I mean, yeah, I’m flattered that I can apparently literally fuck your brains out, but really...”
Oh hai bottom!Noah. Like it should be. And this made me smile, hee. I loved the whole feel of this moment. You are so good at their banter it always just makes me all tingly and smiley and I can hear them going on like this. And all the touching! GAH you have them touching and Luke stroking at Noah and it's so freaking cute and I love it lots and lots.
“It looked like your humans were never going to get their shit together.” He smirks a little at the top of Noah’s head, triumphant. Noah, adorably but frustratingly, has this weird thing about not cursing in front of the dog, like Patti is going to repeat the words at doggy daycare or something.
HA. Noah would tell Luke not to curse in front of Patti. :P
Noah’s eyes are still closed, his lips still parted. “Wh...?” is as much noise as he can make.
Okay, okay. MY FAVORITE THING JAKE DOES AS NOAH? Is this. This eyes still closed, lips still pouted and parted in a kiss thing. SO DELICIOUS LOOKING.
“Luke, shut up,” he grins wide, goofy. Happy. “Love you too. Now fuck me again.”
OH OH LOOK NOAH WANTS TO GET FUCKED AGAIN. SMART BOY THAT CHILD IS.
But seriously, this ENTIRE THING just made me so happy. It smells like Christmas and they are snuggling and I love Patti and the kid thing at the end agfjskagfsaf. And how you still got backstory in with their reunion and Holden into a relatively shortish piece. TALENT MY DEAR YOU HAVE IT.
I can't thank you enough! This is such a great way to start off the Christmas weekend and knowing the boys are fucking under the tree with sparkly lights and Noah built fireplaces is just warming me to the core.
LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU SO MUCH AND MERRY CHRISTMAS BACK AND THANK YOU FOR BEING YOU AND IN MY LIFE.
#TONGUEFACEBACK ♥
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Confession- I really like writing cuddling. It has the intimacy without going into the dangers of writing bad NC17. I like writing about hands, definitely. So this was lots of fun!
Also, I gave you a Frenchie named Patti. (PS, one of my Mormons just tweeted about getting her book for Christmas!) And Jake's lips (it's always one of the first "Noah" images I conjure up too)
So. In the interest of not gushing back, I love you too. Lots. And I was crazy happy and crazy excited to write this for you (Sara was a bonus for both of us!) yay! Thank you!
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