Haha, I don't know if that means you like it or not! I'm glad you think the end is positive--I couldn't leave it all hopeless like that. Sorry for messing with your mind :D
As you well know, I absolutely adored this. But, let me reiterate, as I feel you can't be showered with too much praise.
The way you've rendered their relationship is so true to them - the way Castiel seems to understand Dean in a way which no one else does, the way Dean brings out more of Castiel's humanity (as only Dean can XD.)
Guh, the sex. I've read and re-read it, and it doesn't lose its impact - passionate and sexy and adoring and adorable.
Zachariah, that dick. >_> He needs to have a timeout, I think. Using Dean's feelings for Cas like that. (Made for a nice twist, though!)
Male, female, angel…it didn’t seem to matter any more. What mattered was that he was here, with Castiel, that he wanted to be here, that Castiel wanted to do this, with him. This line really struck me - I think this is precisely how things would work. With Castiel, male and female doesn't really come into play; Dean just feeling like it's right and knowing that he needs Cas, regardless, is really quite lovely.
Awww thank you. I'm so pleased you liked it and it fitted with your prompt. I'm stoked you liked the sex too--it was a bit of a departure no writing full sex like I usually do, but I really enjoyed it!
I was a bit nervous about the twist, so I'm so glad you liked that too. I did have a fluffy ending up my sleeve just in case, but it just wouldn't have worked really.
Thanks so much for reading, and for the fabulous prompt!
It's -8 celsius so that may make a difference. Still bloody cold though!!
Gosh, you just totally shocked me ;O; Such a sweet first time and then big ol' picklepuss Zach shows up and spoils everything T_T But I really loved your ff, very exciting!!
Sorry for the empty pit-- maye a good pie could fill that? :D I like catching people off guard sometimes. Glad you liked the fic, and thanks for reading it x
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The way you've rendered their relationship is so true to them - the way Castiel seems to understand Dean in a way which no one else does, the way Dean brings out more of Castiel's humanity (as only Dean can XD.)
Guh, the sex. I've read and re-read it, and it doesn't lose its impact - passionate and sexy and adoring and adorable.
Zachariah, that dick. >_> He needs to have a timeout, I think. Using Dean's feelings for Cas like that. (Made for a nice twist, though!)
Male, female, angel…it didn’t seem to matter any more. What mattered was that he was here, with Castiel, that he wanted to be here, that Castiel wanted to do this, with him.
This line really struck me - I think this is precisely how things would work. With Castiel, male and female doesn't really come into play; Dean just feeling like it's right and knowing that he needs Cas, regardless, is really quite lovely.
One day, when everything was over, and ( ... )
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I was a bit nervous about the twist, so I'm so glad you liked that too. I did have a fluffy ending up my sleeve just in case, but it just wouldn't have worked really.
Thanks so much for reading, and for the fabulous prompt!
It's -8 celsius so that may make a difference. Still bloody cold though!!
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Yeah, I thought it was a nice touch. It threw me, and I like that.
Though, I must admit, you've made me nervous. You set the bar pretty high with this one, and I'm already fussing over yours a shit ton.
That's, what, like 18 degrees Fahrenheit? Fuck that! I'm from California, anything below 40 is Hell.
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Such a sweet first time and then big ol' picklepuss Zach shows up and spoils everything T_T
But I really loved your ff, very exciting!!
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Oh BTW-- I bloody loved 'Castiel's Star'. Just thought I'd let you know since I don't have an ff account, but yeah, bloody loved it!
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Well, done bb!
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