Lost Fic: Kate/Juliet: 'Drowning is not so pitiful..' Chapter 4

[carlyisnot]

Title :       Drowning is not so pitiful ... (as the attempt to rise)
Author: Carly Carter
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Kate/Juliet (& some unfortunate implications of Jate & Jacket)
Rating: PG ish (Some swearing)
Disclaimer: Don't own anything
Summary: Juliet smiles, brightly, enchantingly. It causes shivers down Kate's spine....

AN: Special thanks to zippy88

Comments

[ladyvictory]

Christ, this is intense! Holding m breath here, my dear!

[carlyisnot]

Thanks so much :) More coming soon, so keep breathing!

[nonsenseandmaya]

More, more! Soon!

[carlyisnot]

Thanks so much for reading and taking time to leave a comment, it made my day :) Definitely more coming soon !

[zippy88]

"Yes, Rachel would never forgive her if she knew the kind of person Juliet had become." I remember talking about this with you and I'm so glad you've put it into this story! It fits so well that Juliet would almost be ashamed of what she's become on the island and that her sister would probably not forgive her for it.

"In any case, she was never going to win a war against Juliet Burke with words." I'm so glad you've put this in as well!!! And the fact that Kate comes back with the way she always wins by hitting Juliet. You've got them spot on!

I also like the last bit where Juliet spots the broken plane and even though she's angry with Kate for taking her sister's things she can't ignore the sight of the plane being the only thing to remind Kate of her past. Wow I could write about this all day, and you probably will come the next email from me! :)
x

[carlyisnot]

I love the last bit too, i can just see Juliet sitting there looking at that plane...

As for the rest of it, as you can see, i was working on the concept of their different strengths in a fight, Juliet still comes across a bit harsher than i think is realistic, but in a way i understand her too. I was pissed off at the world when i wrote that part. So i am projecting my anger onto the poor lost girls. But yeah, i really like the last scene in that chap too, so i'm thrilled you mentioned it :)

[zippy88]

From all our talks about that plane, I can really see her sitting there like you say. It's perfect!

I can see it so well and it's just like what we were talking about (I keep saying this, it's bound to annoy people at some point!) but you've written it so well that I can relate everything back to our recordings!

You know what? I was pissed at the world this morning too (mainly from yesterday) but reading this cheered me up and so many good things have happened since I read this! I like the harsher side of Juliet, I think it was just right how you described her and the things she said and how she said them. I think this story is very much about their different strengths and Juliet's is being harsh through words - and I saw that all the way through this update :)

[carlyisnot]

Aw i'm so glad my fic cheered you up. I hope today will be a better day for you.

It may sound strange, but it cheered me up to write it too :) I'm glad you liked the harshness to Juliet. I was worried it was a little too much, but honestly i like it too :)

[xixlovexgreenx]

DIDN'T I SAY I WANTED THAT ALL FIXED?
Well... not everything at once, but some positive progress and no immense steps back? Oh awesome. xD
But anyway, you wrote this wonderfully again, as always. :D
♥

[carlyisnot]

Aw....you DID say that....and now i will listen and obey you. I can't really fuck things up anymore in this fic, so i guess its time to fix everyone and make it all better. Except Jack he can just stay annoying and mean and alone. Aw i have to be a little bit mean to someone!

Thanks for reading!~