FIC: Restless (Ray Levoi/Walter Crow Horse, PG-13)

[carlyinrome]

TITLE: Restless
RATING: PG-13
FANDOM: Thunderheart
PAIRING: Ray Levoi/Walter Crow Horse
SUMMARY: Turnabout is fair play.
AUTHOR’S NOTES: For rarepair100 prompt #25: restless.

Comments

[carlyinrome]

I, as I may have mentioned, love him.

I knew that about you. <3

I also love the way you keep having Ray's in-laws refer to him as a stray, because that is sort of adorable while being very accurate simultaneously.

I can just imagine them, every time they see Ray, kind of shaking their heads. "I'm sure he's very nice, Walter, but did they only have white ones?" LOL

This is lovely

Oh, sweetie, thank you! I am, as always, ridiculously proud to write something you like.

Small typo: Ray moaned. “No. It makes you muscles ache; it’s painful.”

Thank you! Curse you, MS Word! You complain when I use intensifying adverbs, but this you're okay with?

and poor, poor Jimmy, who really needs these humans out of what is clearly his bed. <3

HEE. I know I say this a lot, but I love the way you put things. Also, it has come to my attention that we have tragically overlooked Jimmy in our picspams. No longer:

[vodkaplaid]

And this sends me off to bed with a smile on my face.

I love uptight, but working on it, Ray. I have a history of liking uptight policeman officer characters. And you make him such a perfect fit with Crow Horse (and Jimmy, of course).

Crow Horse kicked Jimmy, who had snuck up to take Ray’s spot, off the bed for a third time, and buried his face in his pillow. Once you got near enough to when you had to get up, you could chase sleep hard as you could and never hope to catch it. Crow Horse cursed Ray, and Jimmy, and then himself for bringing them both home with him. His mother had warned him about taking in strays.

I really like this bit...the running image...it keeps coming back in your stories :)

[carlyinrome]

And this sends me off to bed with a smile on my face.

<3

I really like this bit...the running image...it keeps coming back in your stories :)

Thank you! I'm glad to hear that; as it is kind of a running theme, it runs the risk of getting old.

I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks.

[storyfan]

It's a good kind of tired, I think. Perhaps Ray should have stayed home and gotten tired the good way, instead.

I'm glad you posted pictures of Jimmy. I have a 3-legged dog myself.

[carlyinrome]

Perhaps Ray should have stayed home and gotten tired the good way, instead.

And one day he'll learn that. He's not stupid; sometimes, it just takes him a minute, bless him.

I'm glad you posted pictures of Jimmy. I have a 3-legged dog myself.

Aw, yay! What's their name?

[storyfan]

Her name's Ruby. She lost her front leg after getting it caught in a trap. She's a red heeler.