FIC: Oases (Kaylee/Kennedy/Serenity, PG-13)

[carlyinrome]

TITLE: Oases
RATING: PG-13
FANDOM: BtVS/AtS, Firefly
PAIRING: Kaylee/Kennedy/Serenity
SPOILERS: Post-Chosen; post-Objects in Space
SUMMARY: So really, this is all Mal’s fault.
PROMPT: Written for alixtii for femslash_minis’ Round 30. Requested was: a sports bra, intemperately hot engine room, and dirt/grease smudges.
NOTES: Many thanks to escritoireazul for her beta. It is

Comments

[alixtii]

Definitely a threesome.

I have to agree with you that explaining Kennedy's presence in the future is totally not required.

The deserts of Bellerephon is such a great little detail, and I like the comment about Kennedy getting to fill the void left by Inara.

And the stripping off clothes in the hot engine room is just guh, as it should be.

Thank you for writing it for me!

[carlyinrome]

I have trouble shipping Kaylee without involving Serenity. Carla's probably right; I should have explained Kennedy's presence. But I was . . . what's the word? Oh, yes. Lazy. Hee.

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the feedback.

[escritoireazul]

Love what you did with the ending. LOVE IT.

And it's not that I think the story needs more about why or how Kennedy is there. I just always want more of your writing. :D

[carlyinrome]

Thanks! For it being just one sentence, I rewrote it A MILLION TIMES, so I'm pleased you liked it.

No, you were totally right; a full and well-rounded story would have included both an explanation for Kennedy, and a description of future underwear. But sometimes I get lazy. :P

Thanks again. I really appreciate your help.

[escritoireazul]

I love being your beta! Thank you for letting me help!

[tooright99]

This was lovely! I love how you explained how much Kaylee likes another girl in the engine room with her, and how Kennedy can do the hard physical part without too much trouble.

And that ending! GUH.

[carlyinrome]

Thank you! Kaylee's kind of a guy's girl, but I think she really enjoys time with the ladies. :) I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story; thanks so much for the feedback!

[cmk418]

You captured the moment perfectly. I love the sense of atmosphere you give here. Well done!

[fluffybkitty]

This is beautiful, I love it.

And I don't think it lacked anything by not having Kennedy's presence in the future explained. If anything it added to the dreamy, in-a-bubble-of-their-own like quality that the description of the engine room and the heat had already helped create.