FIC: "Red, Red, Red (A Sorta Fairytale)" (Buffy/Angel, R)
Most of the stories are in at oldschoolbtvs. And I've read several of them -- and also one of them that isn't yet posted, which is excellent -- and there's a lot of really, really good old school fic up there, so go see it.
My contribution was for southernbangel, and here it is:
TITLE: Red, Red, Red (A Sorta Fairytale)
RATING: R
PAIRING: Buffy/Angel
SPOILERS/TIMELINE: ( Read more... )
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Thank you. *squishes*
And, again, thanks for your awesome beta. I should have the Angela/Booth to you . . . omigod, I have no idea when; I cannot get them into bed!
*panics*
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She was so almost-innocent once upon a time. Naive, at the very least. By the end of the show, she'd become so jaded. I miss *this* Buffy. I loved her most of all, I think.
Poor Angel. He was doomed from the start, wasn't he?
So well done, love. So well done.
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I know. I don't even like to watch seasons six and four; who is that girl? In season five, she still has some hope, some optimism, regardless of the number of times life has beaten her down, but at the end . . . ? That's not my girl.
Thank you so much for your kind words. Feedback from you always makes me a little giddy. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this.
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“Wolves are pack animals. It’s strange that you only saw one-”
Buffy wrinkles her brow. “Huh. Then where’s the phrase, ‘lone wolf’ come from?”
Very, very good old skool Buffy/Angel talkage. I really SAW this, felt it, breathed it. I could hear their voices, best of all. The banter is so crisp. Angel's voice so clear. Buffy's flippant attitude so heartbreaking. I love.
She is a compass; a starfish; a shining, bright diamond of the night sky.
What an absolutely GORGEOUS image. I loved "starfish". How she feels like the centre of the sky beneath his touch.
“Um . . . today we’re talking about . . .” She squints harder. It doesn’t help. “Elephants?”
So Buffy! Again, I could hear this. Spot-on dialogue, hunny.
His fingers draw small circles onto her calf, and the bruise between her legs begins to pull again.
Oh, sexy. I love the "bruise between her legs". How apt and new.
His mouth is raw with the heat and he ( ... )
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Ohmygod, I'm so happy you liked this, sweetie! And you said so many nice things! Perfect things. I love knowing that I made it real for you, that you could see it; that's exactly what I try to do when I'm writing. Thank you. I'm giddy.
Oh, sexy. I love the "bruise between her legs". How apt and new. . . . That is exactly how it tastes.
I don't naturally write NC-17 almost anytime ever; NC-17 is about action, and I'm more about . . . feeling. So I try to express the feeling as close as I can without getting stale, and I'm thrilled to know that I did that for you here. This kind of story is all about details, so that these details worked for you means a lot to me.
I tend to include wolves a lot when it comes to Buffy. She is that kind of woman, isn't she?
Absolutely. And if you haven't already, read "Of the Beast" by kita0610, because that . . . that's a good Buffy/wolf scene.
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She waits.
Simple and clean and fresh. I always love your endings. I might have said that already, too.
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Aw, thank you, sweetie! *beams* I'm really happy you liked it.
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The way Angel looks at her, though, she knows that he’s very appreciative of the matter in which she’s splayed
Did you mean to say manner?
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Thank you, sweetie! And of course you may; I'm always honored when you archive my girls at your wonderful site.
Ooh. You're right. Good eye; I'll be changing that now!
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