Fic: The other side (1/1, Teen)

[carly21]

Title: The other side
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[luckytohaveher]

Beautiful.

I loved the little reversal you did at the end with the whole "Stay with me"/"Forever" that's one of my favorite Doctor/Rose quotes.

[carly21]

Mine too ^^
Thank you! :D

[abbieelove]

That's it. My mind is officially filthy! When I read this The Doctor accidentally shows Rose something he never wanted her to see I had something else in mind LOL!!

This was very angsty, but you gotta love the angst.

Rose's skin wasn't hot under his hands but clammy cold. She wasn't shivering because of her arousal and didn't beg him to do it faster.. Oohhh, I like this bit :) But still daunting that it's not happening.

“Don't go. Don't leave me... Stay with me, please!” Aww, I love him when he begs *hugs him*

This was lovely, I love how he looks after her (because he LOVES her)

[carly21]

That's it. My mind is officially filthy! When I read this The Doctor accidentally shows Rose something he never wanted her to see I had something else in mind LOL!!

Oh, if you mean what I think you mean then I'm pretty sure he wants her to see THAT XD

“Don't go. Don't leave me... Stay with me, please!” Aww, I love him when he begs *hugs him*

That was Rose who plead the Doctor to stay, though ;)

Thank you very much for your comment! :D

[teruel_a_witch]

aww, so poignant, but I do love protective and caring Ten so much <333

[carly21]

Me too. Thanks, hun! ^^

[julesndairyland]

Your angst/hurt/comfort is beautiful.

[carly21]

That's sweet! Thank you very much! :)

[helygen]

This is lovely - it's poignant and gentle and full of love :)

[carly21]

Yay! Thank you! ^^
It was quite a challenge to write... although I'm trying to explore angst lately, I'm usually in the humour/fluff/smut department at home.
So, I'm glad you like it! :)