[DRABBLE] Epiphany

[carisraver]

Title: Epiphany
Pairing: Jin centered - Akame-ish
Rating: PG 13
Author: carisraver
Disclaimer: I do not own KAT-TUN nor anything that of Johnny's Entertainment.
Summary: Jin's painful realization.

Comments

[timedhappiness]

): I wish there was just a little more on Jin's part. And Kame's. Extend please! hahaa ._.; Like... it's so heartbreaking already (really like Koki's character and the use of dialogue) but I wish there was more to explain Jin's reasoning ): T_T you make me a happily depressed fangirl-reader _ _; haha (: <3333

[carisraver]

haha thanks :)

I was already thinking of re-editing this fic and adding more.

Sorry for the lackluster work. I really should have spent more time on the characters. >.

[timedhappiness]

ToT I didn't mean it in the sense of critisizing you (I hope you got that ne ._.v)... just that I particularly enjoyed reading your characters px <33333

[carisraver]

ahh sorry my bad! I'm such a dork X)

I'm sometimes bad with sensing what others mean online >.<

But really, thanks for telling what you want to see more of :)

(lol I just used 3 different emoticons in one comment... what is wrong with me hehe)

[sumomo_yuki]

Yay... sounds good!

[carisraver]

thanks :D

[tia_junan]

This is definitely worth the read. So much is packed into this small piece. Jin sounds so real and the Kizuna....

Nice work. The dialogue is very convincing and I've always thought that if you get the "spoken" words to sound real and natural that the piece takes on a life of its own.

Ki

[carisraver]

Thanks :]

haha It's funny how you mentioned that, I'm trying to revise this fics due to how short it is but somehow my corny self keeps getting in the way. lol

[nessaisdreaming]

nice. quite meaningful. i was waitin for more akame but like u said, jin centered. very good for your first! ur making me wanna write sum fanfics. =)

[carisraver]

you should! you should!
I would love to read a nessafic!