Oct 10, 2004 15:44
INSIDE
if i could rech the stars
i could fly to the moon
all the nieghbors awake
to hear the loud boom
sirens so loud
i can almost each the stars
weaving trough traffic
i can hear all the cars
all in the street
crowded around
hoping to get a peep
the parents are shocked
they can only weep
she's finally free
flying so high
fulfilling her dreams
the question was why
her parents lost
dazed and confused
no one could relate
how they felt
being minetes to late
they carry out her body
all know she's deseaced
they see it as a tragedy
she saw it as her escape
no way out
trapped inside
anger and frustration
all put to the side
photographing the seen
listed as suicide
no one ever knew
she needed help
on the inside
i know, it sounded very suicidal, thats cuz it is, but no needs to worry, the next one isnt so....suicidal sounding, well it is but u probably wont get the inuendows.
CRYING OUTLOUD
crying outloud,
screaming inside
everyone ignores
her confusing cries
laughing outloud
its all so fake
pretending to be happy
for everyones sake
feeling so lonley
lost on the insde
no one ever hears
the "help me" cries
all unheard
never told the truth
of all her feelings
& emotions
they'd say
its just the youth
no one understands
no one can now
but she ended it all
and then they bow....
yea, so there u go hannah!! OMG, tose two poems were both nominanted for some big award and i could win scholorship money!! and both are being published in a book !!