Whee, Dawn, the best part of finishing this fic is getting to read your comments! What I said to Dee, above, applies to you too--You NEVER fail to pick out the passages I liked the most, and/or the plot points I think are the most important, or gave me the most trouble. It's like you have a literary sixth sense, no doubt b/c you're such a good writer yourself. :)
In this case, as usual, you quoted just about every one of the passages I worked on the hardest. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed them! Especially the one about Jor-El:
...it's easy to forget that before SV came along, Jor-El wasn't a douchebag, but a devoted, protective father who gave his own life for his son's. I love that you reminded us of the true Jor-El here.
The more deeply I got into writing this, the more I saw the parallels between the "real" Jor-El and Gabriel, and I'm glad you thought it came out here. :)
And as for Chlex....I hope you're reading the conclusion right now, b/c I think you might like what you see..... ;)
Thank you, as always, for the lovely feedback, Dawn! *Hugs*
In this case, as usual, you quoted just about every one of the passages I worked on the hardest. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed them! Especially the one about Jor-El:
...it's easy to forget that before SV came along, Jor-El wasn't a douchebag, but a devoted, protective father who gave his own life for his son's. I love that you reminded us of the true Jor-El here.
The more deeply I got into writing this, the more I saw the parallels between the "real" Jor-El and Gabriel, and I'm glad you thought it came out here. :)
And as for Chlex....I hope you're reading the conclusion right now, b/c I think you might like what you see..... ;)
Thank you, as always, for the lovely feedback, Dawn! *Hugs*
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