FIC: 0: Simple Past (LotRPS)

[caras_galadhon]

Title: 0: Simple Past
Author: Galadriel (caras_galadhon)
Fandom: LotRPS
Pairing: Viggo/Bean
Rating: G
Archive: Lothlorien, sons_of_gondor and Rugbytackling.
Feedback: Always appreciated.
Disclaimer: Absolutely did not happen. Full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.
Summary: Even in the middle of so much energy and joy, Sean felt alone.
Beta: savageseraph
Prompt(s): "as small as a

Comments

[cinzia]

*happy sigh* Oh, this took me back to those first years in fandom!

I love how Sean's 'tethered' to the light and happiness of the hobbits, even though he feels like an outsider. Viggo is just what he needs to bridge the gap, and fall right in.

*more happy sighing* So beautiful. <3

[alex_quine]

A fine scene, with a lot of backstory filled in lightly only so far as it speaks to your characters at this moment in time when one human being reaches out to another who allows that contact and begins to hope. thanks for posting.

[makamu]

I have to agree with Cinzia: this has all the solidity of a good beginning :) I will comment in more detail later; just now, a particular crossover bunny that Ithiliana gave me demands exercize :) *hugs*

[liars_dance]

that was beautiful. Lovely. Atmospheric. And real. Loved it. I especially loved Viggo perpetually stuck at seventeen :)

[rifleman_s]

Loved it the first time, and it still moves me.

"...and for all his apparent age, he seemed to be perpetually stuck at seventeen."

At first sight yes, but Sean's gradually starting to learn there's more to him . . .