Aw, thank you for the kind welcome and the lovely words! I'm so pleased that line touched you, although I'm sorry it made you cry. ^_^ Thanks so much for your feedback!
A lovely scene, almost as speaking in what is not said, as what is and made poignant by the readers' knowledge of the babe's destiny. thanks for posting.
Hee. Well, you know, there's all these people, and they keep interrupting his naptime! ^_~
*nodnod* I'm not of the Denethor-is-evil camp, so I'm rather more fond of the idea of him as a good man worn down by despair rather than a vicious man who abuses all in his path, and that naturally leads to fascination in how he was before he lost the love of his life and ended up under the sway of the hopeless images in the Palantir. So I'm really glad he resonated for you here!
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This line made me cry :
Would that I will be worthy enough, lucky enough to stand beside you as you grow.
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It's nice - if kind of heartbreaking - to see Denethor so normal, just a loving husband happily gob-smacked by fatherhood. :)
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*nodnod* I'm not of the Denethor-is-evil camp, so I'm rather more fond of the idea of him as a good man worn down by despair rather than a vicious man who abuses all in his path, and that naturally leads to fascination in how he was before he lost the love of his life and ended up under the sway of the hopeless images in the Palantir. So I'm really glad he resonated for you here!
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback!
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